Reviews of Advent of the Archmage by Mo Xiang - Webnovel

Very good read. The author had me hooked from the first chapter, and I can’t seem to be able to put it down because I have to know what is going to happen in the next chapter. I will highly recommend this book to my friends, so that they can also enjoy it. Keep up the good work.

MC is not relatable and likeable. He feels like a robot who is executing tasks and has no emotions. I mean he adapts to the world insanely fast like within minutes. Also all the "friends", acquaintances or relationships he makes seem so superficial and dont have any depth. I mean not enough time is given to form an actual bond. I mean some girl he has talked to maybe 2 hours falls in love with him and thinks about him. He ofcourse is like she's just a friend. Another girl one of the most beautiful 4 women in the world, who has distrust for 3 years and has been hiding from people chasing her down falls for him in one day. I mean come on, they did not even talk or build a bond over time. It seems so stupid, I mean there is no real progression it goes from 0-100. Also he knows its a real world when he is transmigrated but he keeps saying this happened in the game world etc etc. He keeps treating it as a game world even when he has said oh this is my world now. Also all he does is study magic, stays in room, starves, does not eat, or sleep properly. Alot of people say he looks malnutritioned, gaunt, starved and mind you he is a noble. Also author mentions how he doesnt look good as well. I mean he tries to lift a girl to twirl her around but cant because he's that weak. I mean wth is this bs? I mean atleast make it to where a mage grows the mana is atleast revitalizing their body and removing impurities. I get mages body isnt strong but you are telling me that as you gain more circles your body isnt removed of impurities or strengthened any? or even if its not there is alchemy so you dont have any potions to strengthen body to a normal human atleast. I mean its just frustrating at this point.

For a large majority of this story, I had felt as if it jumped from one thing to another up until the end. I’ve read the whole thing and honestly it feels as if I haven’t read anything at all and just stared at a checklist and a log of things the main character needed to do. Not much tension tbh. It’s better than most of the stuff on here though, I would recommend it since I’ve read the whole story. 99% of this story is like lone wolf mc but there is some city building aspects late novel, no harem either. Doesn’t check any red flags.

Good story. Main character is likeable and side characters are either memorable or not important. The world has a deep background, which is revealed throughout the story. Overall, it is good. (I read all chapters)

Personally I feel this is better than average and worth the read. Author has a highly technical writing style for fantasy combat and the world. Does a great job at plot points and giving each faction their own goals. Majority of the story is either combat or some form of improvement. Characters lack personality. The plot is pushing the character.

One the best books I have read. Sad it ended so quickly and I wish there was a sequel

A good MC with the best decision-making I've read so far. Decent world-building. Easy to follow the story with great world-building. An excellent novel. One of the first ones I read at that. What can I say? I became a system freak in the last 2-3 years. Can recommend it.

For the 1st half it's a very good novel worth 5 stars. But for the 2nd half, plot hole, illogical, non-sense, etc. I'm give it 1.5 stars, just skip the 2nd half if you expect good novel.

Honestly speaking I've seen a lot of good reviews and decided to try reading this. I dropped it after a few chapters in. Watching the mc get influenced by the old link is alright(I guess?), But when it's to the point that he actually recognized the girl, knows that she's a super strong demon since her father is at half god level and she's at legendary or something of the sort, yet the mc literally forces himself to think "no it can't be her, it's definitely another Celine." Then he goes on to send her out of the portal to save her, and then he destroyed the portal. Remember this a a strong, VERY strong woman who could've saved him easily, while the mc is super weak. This development left me disappointed and I just dropped it immediately, because if it's like this at the start then I can only imagine that he'll make more stupid decisions later on because he's "influenced by the old link"

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I really enjoy this story but I don't understand, people in this story get very strong but no increase in lifespan? it even states that elves no matter where or what you read have very long life spans but author says their life span is 100yrs the same as humans, very confusing why get strong at all just to die with 80 to 100 yrs kinda pointless. but over all great story.

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interesting story..very good writing ..characters are very well defined.. scenes of novel well explained helps you imagine and visualise. overall good work of art[img=recommend][img=recommend]

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To top it all, it's an average LN, but much better than those half assed LN with to many unnecessary and repeated sentences, have to be refined because it atleast have small problems with patching up plot holes and details, tho it's at most in the minimum, it have a good plot and good ending, not bland, but good... hmm I recommend it to those who likes reading magic and stuffs, and martial arts and of course adventure.

I wrote a review after reading 300 chapters. Now, I am done reading and this is my final review. ********************* SUMMARY: This book started great, ended great, mid story of the book was bad. ********************* Now then, the story concept is really good, combat writing is good also. The author knows how to describe magic battle (or maybe its translator magic?). The beginning was great but there were too many inconsistencies. At midpoint of the book, it was bad, not just inconsistencies, there were countless plot holes and plot armor. You all know MCs always have plot armor, yeah? In this book its the enemies who have plot armor not the MC, and the rate is ridiculous. At around chp 480 (though a few chapters ahead were kinda bad), the story peaks again. It gets better after. Though, there were still inconsistencies and plot holes/armour but it was good. The ending of the book was rushed 'BUT' it was good and kinda epic. ********************* TO NEW READERS AND AUTHOR: So, I'll say it was good I'm general, though people may complain which is understandable but read first before deciding. Also, author needs to improve and hopefully he has, I really liked this story. If the inconsistencies and plot holes were managed properly, it definitely would have been a 5 ☆ book. TO TRANSLATOR: Really god work, but I don't know if the number inconsistencies was from your part or the author. There was also some mistakes in descriptions like Duke, baron and such, it kept changing constantly not telling us which was the right word. Anyway, thanks for this book author and translators. Lokking forward to your next book.

Finally finished this with fast passes! No alt accounts, just three chapters a day! Was it worth it? Unfortunately all feelings pointing to kind of. A great start a middle with so much potential followed by a slow death as all that is wrapped up as quickly as possible. The loose ends just keep happening and only the bare minimum is brought to any conclusion. The Link/Celine romance felt genuine and meaningful and as soon as it was consummated it's done. Link moves right on to the next lady without a thought, and the next, and the next. Most characters are flat out ignored, greatest swordsman in the north? No matter lets focus on getting that dragon queen poon, mercenary company's members? Only when it's convenient to get some named fodder people will recognize. The reviews called it and I didn't listen, the end is horribly rushed and full of plot holes. What drove the story was it's own undoing, the bad guy coming just left so much left aside nothing was done and it pulled open plot holes you could drive a truck thru. A great story pulled into mediocrity.

bryant is the chosen one in the past .. and the MC also the chosen one in present, but they same abandon being a human, what a disgrac, even the desire will be different they abandon being human, and the author said bryant was no longer the pride of human world and the chosen one of the" god of light" because he is now high elf, then what about the MC becoming dragon.. the MC is op but he chose to abandon being human...🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔😥😥😥😥😥😥😥😥😥😥😥😥😥😥😥😥😥😥😥

Read the whole thing and it was quite a good isekai love story. The powerups weren't too abrupt and the story knew what it was. Nothing worldbreaking but solid read

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Thanks for the Awesome Characters Having Amazing Adventures In an Ongoing Story-line with out plot-holes and with generous amount of funny moments throughout

Thanks for the Awesome Characters Having Amazing Adventures In an Ongoing Story-line with out plot-holes and with generous amount of funny moments throughout