A Főnix lánya Hungary version

Hi everyone, I published my story about Hungary.
I don’t speak perfect English yet, but I’m trying to translate little by little.
The English version can be foundhere:
https://www.webnovel.com/book/daughter-of-the-phoenix_18557824306284105

The storie in short:
Growing up in an orphanage, Aliz sets out to find her father and shed light on the mystery of her mother’s disappearance, but what she finds surpasses her wildest dreams.
On the eve of the spring equinox, against her will, the chains start and, dropping into a new world, she must soon realize that her mother’s stories about the world beyond the forest are real.
Behind the tales, however, are hidden terrible secrets, encircling the girl’s legacy and the world lying in the woods.