A Twelve Step Program to Omnipotence In Marvel

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DetachedDreamer

It's a bit early for review but from just the two chapters I feel I've grasped what I've needed to. if im wrong and it develops differently later on ill revise my review. The MC says he doesn't have a power but he does. the most powerful power ever. the power of convenience. for everything conveniently works for him even when his plans are illogical, simple, and/or easily seen through. theres an illusion of struggle and work the MC goes through that the author tries to portray but it's easily seen through. And the MCs goal is to become a God. thats it. That's the whole story. and these steps needed to be taken. its boring. his actions only work because the author says so and not because they follow in laws of the universe. His first kills, innocent soldiers, and he's basically cool with it, ya its justified. again, he tries to portray an illusion of horror and shock but its seen through. simple comments like "he'll have nightmares for days" is all we get, thats his struggle that we will likely not hear more about going forward. he must be a psycho if a simple rationalization helps him move on, even if its true. its stuff like this thats hard to look past. hes not relatable. lots of fluff to look like an exciting journey but I dont see any risk or stakes when I know the power of convenience will save him. maybe he should of started out with a real power before doing all this, it would of been easier to swallow. ill read further to make sure my review is justified but if it continues the same then ill bounce.