Aeternum: Group Chat

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Been_chillin

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jcp1207

Está una historia bastante interesante, me gusta el desarrollo que ha tenido hasta ahora, los personajes ya sea en interacciones o acciones no se sienten forzados y al menos está escrito con lógica, por lo que puedo ver está historia no es harem, sin embargo recomendaría que fuera Harem, pero uno pequeño, mi razonamiento detrás de esta afirmación es que no le veo mucho sentido siendo una historia del multiverso si no harem, después de todo en el futuro conocerá a muchas personas, tanto de su mundo como el de otros, no tiene que ser muy grande, puede ser uno pequeño, máximo 4 o 5, o tal vez solo las chicas de la nobleza de Rías, ya que me imagino que aras un arco donde pelean con la nobleza de Riser Phoenix, Gracias por el trabajo y estaré apoyando esta historia en futuros capítulos

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The_Dark_Hydrax

Hey author does this story have any lemons?

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Akash_Agarwal_7475

Could have portrayed Hermione better ,in this story it looks like Harry begging for it and showering her with knowledge and powers.Here Hermione is more intelligent than albus Dumbledore could ever be,It might seem that she has 1000 years of muggle knowledge,While in books and movies it nothing more than a parrot trying to repeat the book knowledge and steps

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Pure_Dingo

This is a great read. The characters have turned out very well. You have kept them as they were in the canon stories, but slowly grown them into their own. Not too different that you can't relate them to their counterparts, but not so close that they look like they have been copied and pasted into the story. I can't wait to read more.

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bennett_4

Yo , i just read your story and OMG it was actually FIRE. Fr tho, my brain was like in full-on IMAGINATION MODE while reading lol i'm an artist and i take commissions on like Webtoons, Comics, Manga, Character Art and Cover Art. Not gonna lie but dude your story would look insane as a comic or webtoon and I lowkey wanna be the one turn your story into panels no pressure at all. just thought it could be super dope to bring it to life visually if you're down, or wanna see some of my stuff, hit me up on 𝒟𝒾𝓈𝒸ℴ𝓇𝒹 (𝒰𝓈ℯ𝓇𝓃𝒶𝓂ℯ - 𝚎𝚟𝚎.𝚋𝚎𝚗𝚗𝚎𝚝𝚝) hope to hear from u soon Best, bennett.

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Rizky_Akbar_8205

This is amazing, the level of characters development here just peak. I have seen and read a few chat group fanfics with Rias Gremory in it but most of them never really took her growth in mind. and not just the main Protagonist, even side characters here got some development. I really love the fact that there is no Issei bashing here ( usually happened when Rias became some other MC girl in fanfics), and how Rias become the leader that matters to her little family . For this Alone, Awesome. Great job Author-san. I can not say much about the update rates though, there are others out there with even more bizzare update rates . So for this, I can understand . The Writing are excellent , the pace are quite solid. World building is also a strong point here. All in all, solid read.

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Griffin138

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Serious_Reader

update is too slow rest good story good concept and characterization..............................................................................................

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Nay085_digimon

Excellent brother, Story is written very well

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AlexPendragon

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