My Charm System MCS

100,000 years ago, the "Great Blessing" appeared on earth. This cause many humans to gain inhuman abilities, these people were called "Awakened". Awakened were very weak at first, but with help from their "System", certain Awakened could become legends. But every good thing comes with a bad thing. When people started to awaken, spatial cracks called "Gates" formed all around the world causing mass destruction. When technology and the Awakened grew, they were able to subdue the gates and reconstruct the world.

Astrid Tarmon is a otaku who got bullied for being ugly and fat, staying home surviving on instant noodles. He never went to school and grew so lazy that his own family disowned him. Oneday when he was watching anime, he had a heart attack from being to lazy and died, then he entered a black void.

"Do you want to go back, grow stronger, live the life you wanted!" a soothing feminine voice asked him.

"Yes!" his soul answered, this wasn't something he could lie about as his soul was the one that was talking

Soon the black void faded away and a he rose from his bed in shock.

"Huff, Huff, Huff," he gasped for air. "What was that, did I really die in such a pitiful way?" he asked out loud.

[Congratulations! You have been chosen to be awakened with the ability "CHARM" ≧◡≦ ]

'This isn't good, isn't this a trash ability! As an awakened otaku, I should feel blessed, but I want to start an new life! Not one where I die while watching anime!' thought Astrid

"Why did I get charm?" asked Astrid.

[Since you look like a pitiful piece of shit, it has been decided that you should look much better! You should be calling be system-sama because you have been blessed with the ability "CHARM" with good reason! }:-) ]

"THE HELL!" Astrid yelled as he started a long argument with the system.

Meanwhile, a beautiful goddess that would make any man faint was looking down on Astrid from the heavens.

"Will you be the one who completes the task that thousands of others couldn't." she said while watching Astrid with an intrigued expression.
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Since I have 2 novels, I will do 1 chapter each week since I have school. R18 will be included, but it will be some time till that happens.

1. Criticism is welcome

2. Please review as it boost my moral to write chapters

3. Please no hate comments, if you don't like something, tell me so I can not include it in the future chapters, I can't just delete previous chapters so please tell me soon or else it will go on throughout the whole story.