Cinderella and the Seven Hunters CSH

Her name is buried and forgotten in the people's mind, a beauty that cannot be describe, a passion never been seen. She is Louise Carolina Alberta an English aristocrat. Her story can be heard in the mouth of all the witness of her dreadful end. She who fall in love in the wrong man, he who refuse her love. She who will give everything and him who will always by her side but can only be seen in the shadow. A legend pass down about a young girl who fall in love and an apple. An apple that is the mark of her end, and the start of her journey in different lives.
In 21st century a young orphan Beatrice Mary Victoria is bound to this story. When everything changes in the full moon of her 16th birthday, a mysterious man named Sebastian told her that her life is in danger because the 7 hunter wants her heart to gain the power and ultimate immortality.

What will happen to Beatrice?
Who is Sebastian?
What is the relationship between Beatrice and the seven hunters? Is it more than hunter and its prey? Or something
Much deeper?
Is it related to the legend about Louise Carolina Alberta?
Who is the seven hunters? What is the relationship of this legend to the present?
Genre:
Mystery, Supernatural, Adventure, Action, Suspense, Romance, Fantasy


Inspired from Cinderella and the poison apples (Vocaloid),Seven Deadly Sins. This is my first time writing a novel but I will try my best to improve and the update will also be minimal because I'm not a person who just write and do not reread her work . I reread my work for like 20 times but sometime often ignore the problem and also I'm still in University and my beloved companion, Calculus is making me busy. Forgive me if I have some grammatical errors, spelling, punctuation and the likes. After all English is not my first language but I will cope up with my lack and seek for improvement. This novel is intended to test my writing skills and also to seek other's opinion so don't hesitate to complain. I really like to add some question to hook interest and curiosity (as you may observe in my description). And the title kinda resemble snow white and the seven dwarf though but Beatrice is much more valiant and really resemble an independent woman who knows when she need help and when she didn't. JUST ENJOY! XD

Reference:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mipU2LVoyBA


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