Dream stages

nothing but a story with np general derecton but had a poetic sense of thought let me know what you think of the first chapter and the detection it should go I've been reading a lot of cultivation fantasy novels and just decided to try my hands at a story where the main character starts off in the endless void after his love was influenced by life while he was by death both eternal but and balanced but never to touch each other I plan to have him reborn in the second or third chapter by the work of his lover so yeah give me a hand in the derection and personality of the main character and the lover aka life and death male and female yin and yang is a balance of opposites and not a heram or hero story