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blend of the Reptilia28 and CoastalFirebird time travel challenges; Harry, Hermione and Daphne Greengrass die during the final battle and are sent back in time to set things back on track. AD/MW/RW/GW!bash. Rated M for themes and language. AU!world OOC!chars. Expect 450k
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Write a reviewthis is a good fan pic with a great premise I love how you're portraying the characters even though they're back in their younger bodies I'm not very eloquence all I can say is that there are very few grammar errors the story is engaging and I just look forward to more chapters
This is an amazing fan fiction book! I love how your use of language makes them even though they are 14 sound like they are way older than that! I struggle to find good Harry Potter fanfic but two days ago, I found this book. My grandmothers an author and you write so well that you’d give her a run for her money! Keep it up please, this book is what I look forward to every day!
Reveal SpoilerI'm really enjoying the fic, the development of 'connected souls' is a great move and doesn't leave room for a harem (which after reading so many gets boring). estou gostando muito da fic, o desenvolvimento de 'almas conectadas' é uma ótima jogada e não dá abertura para harém (que depois de ler tantos fica chato).
One of the best HP fanfic of WN. I particularly like how they slowly and carefully progress in their bond given Daphne's trauma.
Reveal SpoilerI love the new direction of the story. There are some misspelled or forgotten words, but that's ok can't check everything. the only problem I have is the wait for new chapters. it is killing me. I hope that you keep the story going for a long while. and please don't drop it, please I am begging you to keep going.
Me gusta mucho. Trata de un monton de cosas un tanto incoherentes pero se sustentan en el mismo fic asi que esta bien.
The best fan fic of Harry Potter ever 🥳🥂 The only regret is that I have reached Ch 90 and want to read ahead but there aint more chapters yet😞
this novel has great potential and I only read upto 17 chapters and I can tell that it's great 👍🏽 👌 😀
I love it, it's one of the best HP FFs I've ever read. But it has points that can improve, such as how prudish they are with the relationship and the lack of consequences for Harry's enemies, Daphne should never have been attacked, she is from one of the most powerful pureblood families in Great Britain and would have great consequences against their attackers, so they should be safely thrown into Azkaban and anyone in Slytherin house would know it. And the fact that he gets unnecessary enemies is annoying, you should just stick to dealing with Voldemort, Albus and the Weasley's and not bring in more enemies from other students, maybe Malfoy from time to time but not more, otherwise it becomes annoying.
Chapters are so short, it took me two scrolls to get to the bottom. And with that it still continues a scene to the next chapter. Like they talking about what happened to Harry and what was supposed to happen, in the first paragraph of saying what actually happened the chapters stopes and then immediately continues the next chapter. It would be very easy to fix this but you chose not too, why?
By far the most satisfying clean up of the potter saga. Completely solves all the shit that doesnt make sense and gives them answers in the original jk works. Thouroughly enjoyed and the first 6 chapters alone already hooks you in. Im more upset it isnt finished yet but i will definitely keep this in my library and wait for updates. Keep it up author
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it is such a fantastic story , to me so far it left nothing to be desired , nothing sort of ongoing masterpiece. the development of the story is fantastic , the character's interactions are nothing short of marvellous , and the writing quality is wonderous to say the least , nothing but compliment for this story and honestly i hope to see more of this or anything similar to it
this is not a proper review will write one if this novel is for me, just got a question. Will there be any yuri between hermione and daphne not a fan
Fantastic writing, fantastic character depiction ( although kinda cringy at times), really good pacing and development, all in all a really good fic
Author AbrahamSmith
warning, there is yuri !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!