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In the living world of Neraveth, where gods are born and worlds are forged like toys, war is eternal. Angels, demons, elves, beasts, and humans tear at each other in an endless struggle for power.
Caught in the crossfire, Kaelith Veyr lost everything. His parents, slain in a war that devoured his village. His little sister Lyra, cursed by a dark entity hidden within her heart. Powerless, forgotten, a commoner despised by all races — Kaelith should have died.
But on the night the twin moons aligned, a voice answered his hatred.
Cold. Sassy. Unforgiving.
> [Nyxion Protocol Activated]
A system unlike any other bound itself to Kaelith. Its currency was Negative Points, earned by absorbing fear, despair, and hatred. Its punishments were deadly — lightning strikes, suffocation, soul burns. Its promises were darker still: potions, forbidden knowledge, stolen lifespan… power enough to challenge gods.
To save his sister, Kaelith sacrificed fifteen years of his own life, unlocking the skill God of Negative Emotions, a forbidden power that lets him consume and weaponize every dark feeling around him. Now, armed with a cursed gift and a system that wants him dead as much as alive, Kaelith enters the legendary Aetherion Academy, a crucible where geniuses of every race clash for dominance.
Cold to everyone but his sister, Kaelith must rise from the bottom — outsmarting nobles, surviving assassination attempts, and navigating dangerous rivalries and fragile alliances. Beauties and enemies cross his path, but his heart remains iron. Only strength will free Lyra and uncover the truth about the entity in her heart.
Yet each victory brings Kaelith closer to a mystery older than the gods themselves:
Who created the systems?
What sleeps beneath Neraveth’s pulsing core?
And when Kaelith finally faces the One Who Created All, even his hatred might not be enough. Unless… he fuses his destiny with others, becoming something no system ever planned.
Power. Sacrifice. Revenge. Mystery. Romance.
This is the rise of a boy who embraced the void and became the storm.
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