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After crossing over into the wizarding world, Ivan acquires a system that allows him to grow stronger by adding points.
Snape: "What's with your magic? Why is it so powerful?!"
Voldemort: "I can't lose in a duel of spells!"
Dumbledore: "Here, take my position as headmaster!"
Grindelwald: "A Seer, an Animagus, a Legilimens, a Metamorphmagus, what else have you hidden from me!"
Hermione: "My Ivan! That's my Ivan!"
Luna: "I haven't kissed anyone.. will you teach me, Ivan?"
Fleur: "Although I look like this, I.. I'm still a virgin!"
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MC has Merlin's bloodline and is OP with a system.
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*Translation*
MTL: The first white lord of Hogwarts
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Started reading 'coz the cover pic of Hermione... But now hooked due to an interesting plot๐ ๐
Damn! Finally, someone who understands the lore of HP books. Most of the fkers start writing fics just from watching the movies... This is great,
everything is good until harem tag and i really hating Hermione character and her simps with how these fics are portraying her. she is just a bookworm and thats it and these authors are glorifying it
A hard find [img=nervous]. It seems to be well thought and has a lot of potential ๐ฅ๐ฅ
Good translation I also checked out the mtl version and thats also nice and readable (miracle) Pretty good novel so farrrrr
Pure idiocy, excellent trash, king of morons MC. Simp wuss and beta mc. Trusting bumbledork showing of his talents. Befriending the idiotic trio. Going to gryffindor instead of ravens. This sorry excuse of fiction is clearly a translation, a bad one at that.
JK ROWLING will be PROUD .... love the world building and tge authors take on Spells and Magical theories . its a refreshing and completely new POV to the Series . also its great that thr authors picks the best of both , the books as well as the novel !!
3-2-3-5-5 Writing is okay, there are similar terms written differently, and sometimes they mistake on the same chapter. Story is below average to me. IDKW I kept seeing 5 stars when there's barely any story in it. almost 50 chapters in and we're still on 2nd day in Hogwarts. Pacing is super slow. I like MC most of the time, too bad he went the simp road. Updates are fast. World Background is probably the best part of this fic, most theory and MC's inner monologue about The Wizarding World is spot on.
This is on my top 5 HP fanfics now! So Gooooood!!!!!![img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
The chapters either consist of info dump, mc showing off, or very dry exploration of magical theory that can sometimes even leave plot holes, mc will most likely be showing off while doing so. Put simply, it's boring.
It's a good HP fic. Being Chinese, it has the typical clichรฉ elements BUT, the translator has done a fantastic job in translating and adapting so that it's not too noticeable. The story so far is entertaining and enjoyable, the relationships between the characters are also good and well developed. So far I personally liked it a lot, I hope it continues and the translator doesn't stop it. I recommend it.[img=update][img=More pls][img=Loving it][img=gift]
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this is a interesting read i came in expecting chinese sign in overpowered harem lemon mid work. but found something with potential instead.
I love it, and it's different from all the other Harry Potter fanfictions I read before all of them are good this one just has something exciting to it that I can't explain.
Just one word is all I need to speak of this fanfics excellence and that's "perfect". This fic DON'T need me to over glorify it's nature to others because it speaks for itself.