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I hope I never lose you

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Author: shortcke

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Lyra moves away from her home for a change. A place where the memories doesn't hunt her , or a place that finally gives her hope.

She is excited for her college but what happens when she meets her childhood crush after six years apart and falls in love with him this time.

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    San_Kyz

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    4yr
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    clydieM

    The characters was great. I love how you made this story. The narration is good.

    3yr
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    Honeylife_

    The story is good, chapters are interesting and the characters and funny I really loved the house drama at the first chapter. keep going author!!

    4yr
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    Aaliyah_Stark_

    Wow, I loved the theme and genre. Its so beautifully written as I read through the first chapters. The characters are great and well written synopsis that increases the curiosity. It's amazing and you're so natural with writing. Keep going forward. you're doing great. Looking forward for more .

    4yr
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    NorthStar

    Thanks Author for this story. I’m up till chapter 20 but would like to post my review still. 1. Quite a unique writing style to deliver the feelings in the begining on Mason. Conversations that internalised her thoughts and perception of others and how she felt towards cole thereafter. So the ability to draw the characters and thoughts are vividly described through conversations 2. The slow built up of the story is good in terms of how Ly and cole feels about each other and him bringing her back to his place on the first date to know his family - interesting way to let her know him better - good choice. 3. The curiosity and tension when Mason and Ly bumped into Mason in the lift or when Ly had to choose between Cole and trivia in the game leaving Cole feeling left out and him translating that into his actions for her eg holding her hands tighter is portrayed effectively All in all easy read - enjoyed the little things that happen - day in a life surrounding Ly and Cole - look foward to seeing how they will go on from here. Keep up the good work, there are some typo in spacing and punctuations in earlier chapter (small matter that can be corrected) but other than that good read! 👍

    4yr
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    shortcke

    Thank you aryanastan. i have edit some of the symbols and commas in chapter 1 . Hope i won't make any mistake again. It's kinda hard writing because english is not my first language .

    4yr
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    Aryna_Stan

    Awesome book!!! Honestly, I love the wittiness of the MC and her fun friends. A relatable and very light read, filled with angst and romantic flops, awesome work Author. Would definitely recommend.

    4yr
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    shortcke

    This is shortcke .Hope you like my book , I'll be updating on daily basis. please enjoy, vote and comment .Its my first book and it means a lot to me.

    4yr
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    Xia_Xia89

    I read the first few chapters and I have to say your way of writing is unique. I like the way u portrayed the texting style, it's kinda clean to read. It's a nice book with potential and I hope it do well in the future. Full support to u author! [img=recommend][img=recommend]

    3yr
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    DemonsDescent

    An excellent book. The book is just fabulous. Describing it will only undermine your experience. The author is also a very responsive and good person, so this book experience will just be peerless. Love the book author san. Never give up.

    3yr
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    Heart59

    DEAR AUTHOR, YOUR BOOK IS AMAZING! CONTINUE TO MAKE MORE BOOKS BECAUSE IT’S SO GOODD! EXCELLENT WORK![img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

    3yr
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    swatiikakkr

    this is realy awesome.. .....absolutely fantastic......from my side its highly recommended novel.............good work by author...............

    3yr
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    Harry_Terran

    The plot is awesome, story's updated regularly and best of all is the character development. LOVE THIS STORY AUTHOR! Keep it up and give us more quality content.

    3yr
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    Little_Love_5727

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    3yr
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    Haruma_Miura_8545

    Miss is doing great ... Keep it up ....all the best ... Really love reading your stories ...it's creative and really entertaining to read....

    3yr
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    Pacesetter

    First love hardly dies and the embers are still there. The female lead has been through a lot and is ready for a new beginning by leaving her past life. But she meets up with her crush that brings back past memories.

    3yr
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    pboca
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    Really good, I love the romance part of the novel. keep it up as you are! Really good.

    3yr
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    Haruma_Miura_8545

    it's very interesting to read .... Everytime I finish reading a chapter I can't wait for the next ... The author is doing a really great job

    3yr
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    shaeshang

    Firstly, hat off to the author. This is an interesting story that I've ever read. I'm not into a love story genre but yours is exceptional. It's a fun story. The characters are fun especially the MC. I'm still in chapter 10 but I can't help but write the review because it's so good. Fighting

    3yr
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    San_Kyz

    “The writing was captivating,” “The characters were believable and I cared about them,” “The plot had so many twists and turns I couldn't put the book down.” Specific praise helps browsing readers get a better sense of why your book is so good.❤ Waitin For next Episode💓

    3yr
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