(A/N: People seems to be complaining about the MC being a pussy as he was publically shamed by hippolyta in front of all the Amazons. Well can't you take the hint on why hippolyta did it in the first place? The casual glances she made to her daughter? The way she reacted when the MC remained silent even when she's doing what she did?
No! Some of you wouldn't bother in considering that, as you would rather choose to either insult my MC or my book as a whole. I admit my book isn't that great, I know that, considering I never have experience in writing before, aside from trying to write some story on a whim and publish it without a second thought about two months ago. (this book)
You complain about logic and stuffs, but have you ever put logic when you read? Amazons hate men, yes. But I clearly showed how majority of the amazons don't hate the MC tho? So why complain about him being treated bad? They only gave their agreement on the "honor" part.
Then there comes the "Why is the MC grateful to Hippolyta instead?" Considering what hippolyta did to him? Well it's simple really, my MC isn't as petty as you guys are. Why is he grateful? Well hippolyta just helped him realize many things that's all. And do you know why the MC didn't lash out to hippolyta when she "insulted" him? Well aside from him not being petty, he has this ability called "mind reading" thing that he got from the Creator of this vast and ever expanding universe himself. So basically the MC knows that Hippolyta was testing him, which majority of you failed to realize or didn't even bother to consider to begin with.
Then there's the people screaming "Cringe!!!!" It's cringy? Then I would make it more cringy just for you guys, don't worry. I admit it's a bit cringy, but do you know why I did that? Well I just considered the amazon's personalities and their culture or beliefs that they got to used with. Like what the hell's with using the outside world's common sense into a group of people who's stuck in their island? Complaints about shitty honor and stuffs, really? You would compare your common sense into a bunch of Amazon warriors who still speak using the Ancient Greek Language in their little island? Shame on you for insulting my intelligence when you didn't even thought that far. You translate what he said as cringe. But to the amazon's common sense, it isn't.
Some people also complain about the timeline or on how some characters don't act like the original. Well DC has different versions of their story, different personalities and since this is a "Fanfiction" then I thought of applying my own understanding on the character, yes not entirely accurate, but that's enough for me, the important thing is on how can they influence the story. So I really don't need your complaints about it.
Also, for those... "Loners" who suggested, questioned or demand cruel things like "Why give immortality to others?" Or "He should forget the past completely" or those blunt comments like "Fuck other people! Why give immortality to others?! He should rule DC and claim immortality for his own use!" Yeah~, but no thanks. The MC has enough of losing his love ones so I don't find the reason on why can't he choose to give immortality to others too. This is not a book about your favourite dark and scheming MC type I remind you.
I would also not hide my hate to those alpha males wanna be. You want the MC to attack everyone and show dominance? For what? To inflate your non-existing ego??? You would insult me just because the MC isn't as petty as you guys? The MC is cruel to his enemies, but why would he hate the people who helped him for the past month? He's not a pussy, just reasonable. What, do I need to write what every amazons thought so that you would know that the MC were openly reading their minds? Like always reading their minds? Didn't he did the same to diana even though their close? What makes you think he wouldn't use it to others?
I am not a perfect author that you seek, yes I have anger issues that have gone worse because of me doing a "GROUP" Thesis, ALONE! Like, who would feel good when your groupmates wouldn't even bother to prove themselves that they exist as they continued to ignore all my messages?! Then add up with those stupid comments in my book about what's the use of his backstory.... Really?
Some of you might frown upon my attitude, but can you really blame me? When I need to write the thesis by "hand" and by hand, I mean handwritten... alone? While answering those modules that doesn't shy away to real books in terms of thickness? And add it for worse, to answer it all in 10 days? combined with those annoying insults and complaints! You can't blame this author for showing a bad attitude cause I'm greatly stressed out!
So I really appreciate those good comments and people who motivates me or those people who give advice to this newbie author! Love you guys, all of you were the reason why I still continue to write.
Also, special shout out to whoever you are, I forgot the username. To the one who insulted my very existence just because he find my book worse than average and claim himself to be above me and also claimed to be intelligent as he speak with deep english words. Deleted his review, just an annoying arrogant man. Shout out to you, smartass!)
Sorry for ranting, just want to release this pent up emotions. Would be posting another chapter tomorrow btw, depends if I'm not that busy. Anyways, thanks for those people who gave my book some stones. Appreciate you very much guys.