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In Supernatural TV/Vampire Diaries with The Force as the Chosen One
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(A crossover of Supernatural, The Vampire Diaries/Originals and elements of Star Wars and Castlevania.)
I was well... I think reborn is the best word for it. I was reborn without my memories for around 9 years as Lucien Milligan- or should I better say, Lucien Winchester.
3rd son of John Winchester, half-brother of my two older brothers Sam & Dean, and the older brother of my two years younger- Adam Milligan.
I think you already get the idea that this- this is not a good thing. Not at fucking all. I am literally in a cursed family! You can not tell me otherwise! My entire family tree is basically full of puppets who couldn't see the strings attached to the hands of Michael and Lucifer!
Okay- okay, sorry, I got a little emotional there.
There is good news- thank God!
Apparently my soul was... supercharged- I think that's the best way to describe it - when I was reborn into this world.
(Crossing totalities apparently does that).
It needed to release all that energy, and so, when I was watching Star Wars at 9 years old, and my memories returned at the end of the Return of the Jedi movie, and well, something insane happened.
I as a kid of course like any other kid wanted superpowers- the Force, I wanted the Force.
You know Tulpas? The thing with enough concentrated soul energy and belief created the Olympians, Norse, etc. In the world of Supernatural?
Basically the same happened- I CREATED THE FUCKING FORCE BY WANTING IT!
ON SOME BARRY ALLEN TYPE THING WHERE HE CREATED THE SPEED FORCE THROUGH HIS ACCIDENT!
Yeah! I'm basically now both the Father of the Force and the Chosen One- I look like Anakin Skywalker too it seems (thankfully, the movies in this world had different actors.)
Now, the greatest question is, how do I survive this clusterfuck of a world, and along the way save the world and the people in it.
(KEEP IN MIND, LUCIEN TOWARDS THOSE HE CONSIDERS HIS, BE IT FAMILY, FRIENDS OR EVENTUAL GIRLFRIEND, IS KIND OF A YANDERE I.E. POSSESSIVE.
If this isn't your cup of tea, you have been warned.
It is because of Lucien having lost family now after reincarnating.
In his first life, having had very loving parents who have constantly been at the risk of losing them because of their own illnesses- making Lucien quite terrified of being alone, causing this nature of his.)
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(Author note: Some points I will address.
-When the Force is created, he is shielded by his own power- so no one sensed that he made it, but it now is a fundemental part of the Supernatural Multiverse.
-Don't think when people find out he has the Force that it is going to be funny- no people who understand will shit bricks.
For example- If I told you I had the powers of Superman by wishing it as a kid, will you laugh at me for wanting fictional person's powers or be terrified of me actually having them?
-Lucien is a good guy- he is a Hunter, so don't expect some evil mastermind, Palpatine type character, or a remorseless, selfish monster.
Yes, Lucien can be selfish- yes, Lucien puts his loved ones above others, always, but he does care about people, and wants to help them. And will feel sadness when he fails, and guilt and the like.
-Don't expect an overpowered character who from the get-go can make Azazel run for the hills- no my friends, Lucien, has no idea how he is going to use the Force to its true potential since he has no teacher. Only can search wiki and the internet and comics and the like for info- AND EVEN THEN, THE FORCE HERE IS NOT EXACTLY THE SAME SINCE IT'S BASED ON WHAT HE THOUGHT IT WAS.
I BASICALLY PICK AND CHOOSE WHAT THE FORCE CAN FROM CANON AND LEGENDS OF STAR WARS AND MY OWN INTERPRETATIONS (I'm not yelling, I'm emphasising.)
Well, I hope you enjoy.
See you all later,
Bye!)
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you'd expect an op or just strong mc when he is supposed be like the god of force but what we get is a weak one it can be attributed to him being young and not have enough training but the battles feel like shounen manga you can skip the fight and get the same conclusion villain too strong but mc defeats him somehow and ends up in hospital.if you're expecting an mc who is strong or grows quickly strong this is not for you.
Samuel, Son of Dawn, A wordsmith as legendary as any better than most, in league with titans. It has been an absolute pleasure to read and immerse myself in your tales brilliant and awe-inspiring. All I wish is that you continue to flourish, to let your literary flame burn ever brighter, and take us with you on that journey.
Not for me. The protagonist is pathetic. He's afraid of a prostitute who sexually assaulted him in his dreams. He should be angry, not afraid. He's a coward. Plus, he's one of those people who has the attitude of a child when mentally he's not one. He's incredibly immature; he keeps his problems to himself instead of talking about them—and not normal problems, but serious ones. Plus, I can't stand things dragging on too long with a child protagonist. It bores me.
A new fanfic written by my favorite author and it's a supernatural fanfic, 5 stars because Samuel knows how to cook. [img=update]❤️
I've read till chapter 12 before dropping it, it's not because it wasn't good but because I didn't quite like the flow of the story and how it was going on. I would say that if this time the author could finally finish a fanfic before moving on to the next, it might be an excellent fanfic for once.
Hi, having been a long time fanfiction reader, I have read a lot of them, so I hope you won't mind some constructive criticism. I have read 50 chapters up until now and I have the following issues: 1. If you would like to interact with the reader, kindly use the header or the footer for Authors' Notes, Polls, Additional Information or even Long Rants. 2. Add necessary tags like Dark, Slow Burn, etc. (So that readers can make an informed decision if they want to read your work) 3. Regarding character design, it has been inconsistent. Some moments in the earlier chapter his naivete and power levels - even his constant faintings were frustrating but very understandable but after 50 Chapters he has only one fight through which he remained conscious. I am not saying make him OP, all I ask is him showing that he has grown in his power, if he can't have the raw power let him use it creatively. Example: Use telekinesis to cause friction in air and make fire, pull out water vapour from the atmosphere, manipulation of air to create strong concentrated winds or limited geokenisis.Use other media as inspiration. 4. Even the most grim and dark writers (Wildbow with Worm or Guiltythree with Shadow Slave) allow their protagonists small wins, something they can be happy about. There are a lot of emotions and buildup which finally gives the reader some payoff, you have completely boxed the protagonist in a corner. He is neither broken by his extreme circumstances (Which would be welcome since we can finally have some payoff) nor is he showing any inclination towards the opposite where he becomes resolute to better his situation with whatever tools he has available. 5. Why are his powers so convoluted? It's like the Force but it isn't? Even if you are waiting to reveal it in the future, at least let us know some basics to avoid confusion. For example I am still thinking why does he need to draw life force to heal his dad from other living beings and himself when he can use the light side that according to Star Wars canon is the embodiment of life, creation and light (Pls fact check me if I am wrong). 6. Last but not the least is the world building, while very expansive, it has become very convoluted. With 3 different vampire settings and powers that have deviated and merged, it has become a chore to remember everything when I am not even familiar with 2 of the franchises. You have done an amazing job writing this, hope you stay motivated and better yourself and not take my criticism as a negative. Looking forward to your future and this story.
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my opinion: no real explanation on the progression of the character's powers, not really a training session that really highlights the use of the Force (while lucien is supposed to have unlimited access: midichlorian + infinity). even after several years of training, the only result of his fights is a big highlighting of his weakness (lucien almost only comes back with self-inflicted injuries due to his lack of control). oh and if you were hoping to see the progression of the MC during the episodes of supernatural, you will have to wait a VERY long time (chapter 23: still nothing)
Too much info dumps and the fights were pretty bad, it's a loop of the Winchesters getting their ass kicked, Lucien fainting from overfatigue. Aside from that, we simply see other villains planning on MC's demise. That's basically it. It's just ridiculous that MC kept getting side effects or exhausted like wtf, he's not a Jedi but force himself. Even Rey Palpatine is more OP than MC. XD and the move spanned for like 5 days. MC had the force for half a decade and he's still getting curb stomped by freaking Vampires and Werewolves.
The character got hyped up just to be completely useless. Not hating on the story just didn't make sense. You say he's a pillar of reality but he isnt. The even in the story it contradicts. But whatever imma just enjoy the story.
this is my honest review, the world building is good, writing quality was exceptional, etc. but i drop this fic at chapter 73 due to story is not to my taste. i can see a lot of people will like this fic but its not my cup of tea. my reason is: 1. while the author has done a very good job in mashing up a lot of series together i can see tahat it will be quite hard to understand future chapters. 2. i dont like the 'psychotic murderous character' being given second chance trope in this fic. of course this is just my personal preference. 3. Mc that weirdly naive and sometimes quite disappointing even though he was mentioned being more matured. he knows he's being manipulated and yet keep letting the manipulations continue. sometimes its hard to imagine if he have any will to decide things by his own hand. - bear in mind that this review is just my opinion and personal preference only. im not trying to discouraging anyone to read this fic. if anyone have time to read my rant then i hope u give this fic a read to judges it by yourself. the author was genuinly good writer.
It's really good, the pacing and character growth are some of the best I've seen and I love how Lucien is powerful but not so overpowered that there's no risk or room for growth.
This is a really good fic and somehow made me care about a character that I already hated and now I don’t know what to think other than great job as I pray this character isn’t killed off.
ia começar a ler essa história, mas com teu histórico de começar uma história, escrever bem ela e depois parar de postar capítulos ou passar vários dias sem postar, acho que vou deixar pra próxima.
l haven't seen supernatural or Starwars but l like Samuel as he always makes banger but leaves them halfway through let see what happens to this one😂😂😂😂👍
it's a great story from one of my favorite authors. I just wish this story doesn't get dropped like many others
the chapters are gold, i mean it, he gets the essence of the characters and ads his New world in it without any weirds moments.
Amazing writing keep up the great work. Have been waiting for something like this.
Okay, so I was reading it till ch. 66, and then I got it and decided to jump to ch. 100, and was proven right. Of what you ask, well of the fact that it's just a shounen story, yes just like Naruto, hxh, one peace and many more. How is it one, you ask? Well, it's simple, in shounen genre there is a particular way story goes, like this: 1. Protagonist gets unusual/new powers 2. Trains 3. Fights some enemies 4. Wins some 5. Then comes some sort of big bad, and you guessed it, he kicks protagonist ass 6. start from point 1. And well the popularity of the most famous shounen stories proves that this works, and I'm not saying that it's actually bad or something, some of them I like quite a lot. Unfortunately, I grew tired of them, to the point of deep annoyance. So, I turned my attention to stories with OP characters. When OPM aired, I was so happy you have no idea, and I was equally frustrated when it turned into exactly the thing that annoys me, only now shounen protagonists were support characters, with saitama pushed to background. And it's understandable, annoying, yes, but understandable. Trully good stories with OP mc so little that it's not even funny. It's hard to write about OP mc, it's either gets boring or author pushes it to a slice of life cooking story. And yet I still look for this kind of story, mostly trash, but some of them can be actually entertaining. That's why I came here expecting OP mc story, with force powers in supernatural world, it is screams about OP, probably why you, author, get so many complains about mc strength and him losing often, but unfortunately I didn't get one. I kept reading though, cause writing was great, mc progresses and grows, even if it's hard to see with him losing so much, but again shounen trait, what can you do about it, characters were well defined and believable to their canon counterparts, world (and as it turned out later, worlds smashed into one (even if I'm not a big fan of some of them) building was actually quite good. And just because I dislike stories like this, I won't say it's bad, cause it's not, it's just not for me personally. Maybe I'll wait until you're done with story, or at least far enough, so I can get my dose of kickassery, and not towards mc, but towards his enemies. So keep writing you are good at this.
Every time I see this story has a new chapter, it brightens up my day, genuinely, in my top 5 fanfics I have ever read anywhere. So big ups to the author, he has written something amazing, and I hope this story gets the endings it deserves when the time comes, and it doesn't get dropped prematurely.
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