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Synopsis
As a dimensional traveler carrying high-dimensional information into the Warhammer 40K universe, would simply dying in a reasonable way lead to invincibility?
Zhang Ge glanced at the lasgun in his hand and asked his companion the name of this planet. Upon hearing the answer "Sentinel," he remarked, "Never had such a wonderful start."
As a grunt in the Imperial Guard, how hard could it be to die in a battle of this scale? You basically don't need to do anything - just stay in the trench, and the enemy will ensure you die in creative ways.
However, things weren't as simple as they seemed. When merely touching the lasgun made its machine spirit tremble with joy, when he managed to peek out of the trench and kill a dozen heretics, when an artillery shell landed hard in the trench with its shrapnel and shock wave sweeping across the entire platoon's position, killing thirty to forty friendly troops except Zhang Ge himself...
He realized that things might not be as straightforward as they appeared...
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Write a reviewthe story is decent but if you know anything about 40k it makes it painful to read due to all the plot holes and things that shouldbt be happening in ths 40k setting. also since we know he'll never die its practically impossible to get invested in his character.
Will him became a space marine? For the Emperor!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Nice read. A bit confusing sometimes, but the recurring theme where the MC would just miss the chance to die is pretty good. Glad I gave this a try!
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Basically story is just constant battle without any real plot, super boring. And shtick is that mc would become super powerful after death but literally whole universe is keeping him alive even though he's trying to die. Though no actual suicide allowed. It's just one senseless battle scene after another.
Not the best, but also not the worse. Needs work with the translation since it’s not able to deliver the fanfic’s full potential that’s why it’s rough and inconsistent hence my rating. As someone who also uses AI to translate and have the audacity to ask for monetary support I do suggest you put in at least some effort in proofreading and fixing any inconsistencies, mistakes and modifications the AI often makes when translating so as to not ruin the reading experience. With that out of the way it’s an interesting fanfic, despite my lack of knowledge of warhammer lore as I still found myself enjoying it even though it gets confusing, I do hope the translation quality improves as this can possibly rank quite high in the rankings.
Honestly this is one of the better books I’ve read I found it quite good. At the very least the idea is fascinating and I believe you are bringing this idea to life quite well. I hope you continue to update it. (Side note the idea of putting the Christian god in this world is quite interesting, I’ve never seen it done before and so far I quite like it.) (Reasonings Writing is well done I don’t expect perfect some slight areas where I get confused trying to understand but is mostly smooth. Updating is currently self explanatory. Character is due to a light lack of depth on what characters look like but I’ve never found this to be an important criteria for me. It also leaves the imagination but for those with less an idea as to what the characters in this world would look like it may be of use.) World background is that its warhammer 40k which I believe to be extremely interesting and with the way it is done so far you have a lot you can work with but I do recommend ensuring you have a rough idea of when blank thing is. But keep in mind you can mess with that stuff via warp Tom foolery if you want as it is possible to go forward and back in time. But for consitencey likely best to not use it too much or at all. Basically mess with cannon how you wish but i recomend keeping named charachters the way they are and attempting to understand them slightly before putting them in ie basic personality/belief.)
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i feel cain energy from him............................................................................................................................
The Author really knows what he is doing, good quality writing good details but not too long, Only complain I have is, I NEED MORE CHAPTERS 🤙🤗
Absolutely amazing, plot, story development, the way the author showed the World background all of it seems real and genuine unlike other Chinese fanfic. Thank u for translating
Normally in any given Chinese fanfic, everything is generally distorted to appear more Chinese, And especially in Sci-fi novels it’s generally worse. Not the case here. Author is very true to original source. It’s funny, plot is pretty good and translation whilst a tad spotty at time is still very good. Much better than AI slop we generally get fed on this website anyway.
Author SHERRY
The story is good, quite liking it, the author knows his stuff. The translation unfortunately could use work, needs a few mental exercises to figure out which WH40K specific equipment or faction is referenced and such. Overall I'd say it's a fair read for webnovel.