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Lord of Mysteries:The Good Witch
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A failed attempt to ascend to the rank of "Witch" ended in her untimely death...
Yet, the corpse that should have decayed rose again, now housing a soul from another world.
"What? I was a knight of the holy order—how did I wake up as an assassin?"
When the code of a knight clashes with the fate of an assassin, what kind of new existence will emerge from the collision?
This is a translated version: https://www.69shuba.com/txt/50761/33036482.
"Ten chapters per week, starting with the five chapters I updated for this week."
This is a translated version.
Author:Author:囧囧yo. Or 诡秘：善魔女
" if you find any mistakes or misspelled names. Let me know—thank you!"
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Is this a rewrite? I think I read this one a while back with the same plot just a different name can't seem to find it.
As of chapter 176 this is a pretty good fanfic overall. There are just a couple things the author could fix. The author sometimes says the wrong words like calling Beyonders Extroardinaries or calling The Empress The Queen and those mistakes are consistent across multiple chapters. Additionally some of the later chapters end up being repeated entires and sometimes copy pasted onto newer chapters so the chapter length would be twice as long but the first half is the previous chapter. If the author fixed these things the story would benefit a lot.
Writing is 5 stars, outside of the occasional confusion on pronouns past chapter 60 its perfect. Update is 5 stars, not because it’s fast but because I’m unaware. I do recal reading this a year ago so I wouldn’t be expecting the story to end any time soon. Story development is a 4. Authors talented don’t get me wrong I’m just dropping a star for personal reasons. Examples: the mc is aware of the acting method yet doesn’t even try to use it leaving the author to do the majority of leg work convincing sure but very lame to miss such a vital aspect of the story. I would like to view the mc as a protagonist of such an insane story but she hasn’t shown that she’s worthy of that. Outside of some special treatment by the the night goddess there hasn’t been any signs of her even beginning to be half as interesting as Klein. Second to last, every characters escape, like am I the only one who isn’t annoyed by this shizz. Once or twice sure but every time. Lastly I’m particularly annoyed that your not killing Tris but your also not offing the main cast yet so I’ll ignore it. Character is a 3 this is once again on the personal reasons side and a big annoyance for me feel free to ignore. First why is the mc a girl there is no point to it outside of it being fun for the author to write that way. And why are you so against her wearing girls clothing. I’m an odd fella but getting me to go through 70 chapters and give nothing is so not cool. The mc is hiding that she used to be a boy by dressing and acting like a boy this isn’t entirely on me. World background 5 stars it’s lotm what do you expect Overall great work, I can tell you’ve worked hard. Thanks for entertaining me.
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I love Lord of the Mysteries, and this fic really caught my attention with its unique concept. A lot of LOTM fanfics tend to lose direction after a few chapters, but this one has stayed surprisingly consistent so far. The atmosphere feels true to the original, and the pacing keeps me hooked. I’m looking forward to seeing where the story goes next!
Thanks for your hard work and thanks for the chapters and can't wait for new chapters and hope you don't drop and take care ,♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️
𝚁𝚎𝚊𝚍𝚒𝚗𝚐 𝚢𝚘𝚞𝚛 𝚜𝚝𝚘𝚛𝚢 𝚒𝚜 𝚕𝚒𝚔𝚎 𝚠𝚊𝚝𝚌𝚑𝚒𝚗𝚐 𝚊 𝚖𝚘𝚟𝚒𝚎 𝚒𝚗 𝚜𝚕𝚘𝚠 𝚖𝚘𝚝𝚒𝚘𝚗,𝚎𝚟𝚎𝚛𝚢 𝚍𝚎𝚝𝚊𝚒𝚕 𝚕𝚊𝚗𝚍𝚜 𝚙𝚎𝚛𝚏𝚎𝚌𝚝𝚕𝚢. 𝚃𝚑𝚎 𝚠𝚊𝚢 𝚢𝚘𝚞 𝚜𝚎𝚝 𝚞𝚙 𝚜𝚌𝚎𝚗𝚎𝚜 𝚊𝚗𝚍 𝚌𝚘𝚗𝚟𝚎𝚢 𝚎𝚖𝚘𝚝𝚒𝚘𝚗𝚜 𝚒𝚜 𝚜𝚘 𝚟𝚒𝚜𝚞𝚊𝚕, 𝚒𝚝 𝚖𝚊𝚔𝚎𝚜 𝚖𝚎 𝚝𝚑𝚒𝚗𝚔 𝚝𝚑𝚒𝚜 𝚠𝚘𝚞𝚕𝚍 𝚋𝚎 𝚊 𝚜𝚝𝚞𝚗𝚗𝚒𝚗𝚐 𝚌𝚘𝚖𝚒𝚌. 𝙷𝚊𝚟𝚎 𝚢𝚘𝚞 𝚌𝚘𝚗𝚜𝚒𝚍𝚎𝚛𝚎𝚍 𝚋𝚛𝚒𝚗𝚐𝚒𝚗𝚐 𝚒𝚝 𝚝𝚘 𝚕𝚒𝚏𝚎 𝚟𝚒𝚜𝚞𝚊𝚕𝚕𝚢? 𝙸𝚝 𝚑𝚊𝚜 𝚜𝚘 𝚖𝚞𝚌𝚑 𝚜𝚘𝚞𝚕—𝚒𝚝’𝚜 𝚖𝚊𝚍𝚎 𝚝𝚘 𝚋𝚎 𝚜𝚎𝚎𝚗.
I read it till the end with MTL. This is the best LOTM fanfic, that goes from beginning of the story all the way to the apocalypse battle that happened at the end of COI. The early arcs aren't that impressive, with story being on the rails of the original. But eventually the story does become it's own. The later arcs that cover the high sequences arcs are pretty much better than original. In original, the author rushes through them towards the ending. here they all get proper development. There are some insane plot-twists involving MC as well, that get revealed so late into the story. There are weak points in here as well. In a way, this is also a wish-fulfillment/"fix the original type" of fanfic. All those emotional beautiful deaths and all sorts of terrible outcomes that happened in original get fixed in this FF. If someone tried to write this kind of development with 0-08, the quill would answer "this isn't reasonable". In the world of LOTM, it certainly isn't.
It is truly a pleasure to have experienced this fanfiction, as it has brought immense joy. The quality of the writing is consistently high, making each chapter a delightful read. I find myself eagerly anticipating the release of new chapters, captivated by the ongoing narrative. Furthermore, the story's ability to hold my attention is a testament to its brilliance, leaving me wanting more. Ultimately, thank you for creating such a wonderful and engaging piece of work.
I recently finished reading the fanfic, and I must say, I thoroughly enjoyed the story. The author's writing style was captivating, drawing me in from the very beginning. The characters were well-developed, and I found myself invested in their journeys. The plot twists kept me on the edge of my seat, making it difficult to put down. Overall, it was a fantastic read that I would highly recommend to others.
been hooked since chapter 1 definitely one of the better LOTM ffs out there please dont drop and im looking forward to reading more thanks author :)
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thanks for your work. i hope this will update daily till finish.thanks for your work. i hope this will update daily till finish.thanks for your work. i hope this will update daily till finish.thanks for your work. i hope this will update daily till finish.
It’s a pretty good read for those of you who are hesitant to pick it up. I suggest you give it a try. It also has a really interesting It’s a pretty good read for those of you who are hesitant to pick it up. I suggest you give it a try. It also has a really interesting
Gave five stars to ask question. Will there be romance? Or no romance?, I am writing for the original mt. Its a very good book and I hope that you will continue posting it on webnovel and do a little improvement in the translation.
Gave five stars to ask question. Will there be romance? Or no romance?, I am writing for the original mt. Its a very good book and I hope that you will continue posting it on webnovel and do a little improvement in the translation.
I love LOTM and this fic has an interesting concept. Many LOTM fics get lost along the way, but this fic remains consistent so far. -----------------------------------------------------------------------------
I have read a bit into the future, I can say that this fic has a very heavy LOTM writing style, practically undistinguishable from the og novel. With elements that makes you feel like it was the same as reading LOTM, with the only difference being it follows another MC Spoiler: Angel got together with Klein. Our Fool now knows the taste of a Demoness
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