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Luffy Twin Brother: The Monkey King
3.75 (26 ratings)
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Reborn in the world of One Piece, our handsome, proud, and arrogant MC finds himself reborn as the twin brother of Luffy.
{This is a world-traveling story}
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good except for a couple of points that are actually just enough to drop it. - The mc forgets the majority of his knowledge about the world in which he reincarnates in... this is a big thing not only for me I believe, but for others as well since memories define who he is and who he would become... making him forget memories as little as his knowledge and recolection of the anime might as well make his whole changing and viewing and thinking of different realities colliding with his own self worthless when watching that anime in the past. - his name is Lucy... come on, just go Lucky at this point, lucy was fine for the real luffy because it was for a couple of episode/chapters. or might as well call him Rufi
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firstly mc name is really shit like you can give him any name first a girly name lucy atleast it was bearable but kong bro I know you want to make it funny but atleast choose good name and second goddess she wants him to save his world but why messing with him because he hits some joks bro and his cheat bro iIdon't want to say anything about it is also sheet👎👎👎🤮
Man, I really tried to like this story, I really did try to. It had an interesting idea, but the execution was horrible. There were so, so many inconsistencies with the plot, with the mc's ability, and so much more, and its not even something complex that was wrong, its completely obvious stuff that even a kid would know that's incorrect. Like blud straight up said that lightning travels at a speed of 270 mph, while the actual speed is 270,000 mph. I wanted to give the benefit of the doubt that he might've somehow missed the 3 zeroes, but the sentence was said in comparison to the mc's speed, so it was very clear. Like Author really thought that there was cars which went faster than lightning. In short, this story is one brain aneurysm after another.
Come on, 1st bad comedy, girl hits boy for no reason even though Mc is super strong. 2nd Mc with Zoro's curse... very boring. 3rd The goddess who wants to mess up Mc's life because of 1 joke. 4th not counting Mc himself, because he was reincarnated but doesn't remember anything about the world he chose to go to, and has the intelligence of a child, it would be easier to just make him Luffy's twin without the reincarnation part which could generate a much better story.
the first 4 chapters are good so far I just hope that you keep writing it's hard to find fanfics with more than 100 chapters keep it up
honestly the story is inconsistent mainly with the mc as we have no idea where his strength sits cuz you keep going all over the place with it and for some reason despite the name there is like one mention of sun wukong and nothing else the mc might as well have a different devil fruit and for some reason the mc is presented as smarter then luffy yet is consistently shown to be a moron
For fans of One Piece, the presence of a character like Lucy with a unique demon fruit will surely make Saya even more curious to follow the continuation of this story. 👍🤩👍
the novel is fun to turnoff your brain and read the mc gets op fast and the story draws you in the reasons why its not all 5 star are: 1. Story:pace is too quick and needs a bit more filler, an extra chapter here and that shows the downtime of characters training, going about their life or even diferent viewpoints of marines would add more flavour to it 2: The mc does train and grow in power but i dont see any change in his personality probably couse i didnt see his in entirety just yet and qiuck pace makes it hard to connect to him 3:Background is good but could use more development at the moment as i dont really see enough of it to form a clear image of the world the mc is in 4.I watch one piece so i can imagine a lot of what you write but if it was an anime i didnt see i would be nearsighted in your story so it could use more decription of locations characters are at ps. to author pls dont think your story is too rushed or alike for everyone this is just my view of it and i already like it as it is. No need for changes if you in any way see how it should develop i would love to see it writen to finish and that will be hard to do if you change YOUR story to please other people and lose that view so pls keep true to your sight of how the story should be and those who enjoy it will stick and keep reading :)
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bs mc, bs 100x with all sorts of shit. like wtf debuff 100x for water? it's negating then because he has 100x resistance lmao. Anyway, zorro wannabe directional king, etc, etc. and a new goddess that was a bonus for all sorts of debuffs like memory loss, bla, bla.
Pretty good so far, story development is fast paced but not too bad, and I am enjoying having an overpowered MC, he will just get stronger and stronger the more he fights.
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I like the story I feel like the thing with the goddess might get weird in the long run but so far good story
I ENJOY READING THIS SO FAR, ENJOY THE PREMISES AND HIS CHEAT THAT ARE NOT THAT OP BUT STILL OP AND I HOPE THE AUTHOR CONTINUES WRITING THIS FF, PLEASE DO NOT DROP THIS STORY
Overall, it's a stable and interesting read. I didn't have high expectations, but the writing quality is good; I like it, and it doesn't make me lose track of the story. It's a fast-paced development and it's not bad, I've seen worse things and I like this fanfic 😁😁😁✌️✌️✌️✌️ Although I haven't seen any harem stuff, It's definitely a label that always makes me drop any book. I hope it doesn't fall apart; it's on the right track.
Needs work. The only part that kept me going was the Monkey king part, cus it's suuper interesting, and it fits. Like, imagine Nika and Wukong together. Story's too fast paced. He zooms past over the grandline just to repeat it all over. Too many plotholes/inconsistencies in the story, tho Idk if that's just the translation. Needs a rewrite ASAP. Has great potential if the Author gets the details and story progression right.
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First, giving MC Zoro's curse just kills it for me, Second, MC's name? yea, i know u just tryna be funny, but it makes it hard to read cuz the name just keeps popping up as making MC a girl, Lastly, the whole goddess messing with MC just cuz he joked around, wow ok, not boring at all~ and not cliche at all~🙄 PS: I will still give it a chance