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You and Edgar come to a compromise on how you wanna spend your last few minutes of living.
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Simple dubcon fic, includes wound fingering and major character death so if that's not your cup of tea... probably not for you I imagine. Character belongs to KVVA/Splatbox on YouTube
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You're a Bad writer. I really hate how you decided to make Edgar out to be a completely merciless monster with no mercy at all. I understand that some characters are made to be villains but this. This is just poorly written and produced. I don't have any feedback but disappointment. Next time, If you're gonna write about a character, especially compared to "real life" stuff, Get the facts right. Edgar is a sociopath! Not a monster psychopath. Believe me, Edgar is small potatoes compared to actual villains but then again, Edgar was poorly made from the beginning but still this is not an excuse. I'm speaking as a writer myself and I say this is very bad.
I don't know what the other reviewer was going on abt, but holy, I love your stuff!! You're like the only person who writes for Splatvox on this app and it's so refreshing, the amount of detail you go into is insane and it creates this feeling of dread for me lol, especially when Edgar started fingering the wound literally made my squirming around and pausing because I'm a very imaginative person so it was like actually feeling it happen. The only reason it's not a full 5 stars is simply because I do feel like it depends on the audio too much... At least in the first half, but this was your first work of Edgar, and you've gotten so much better writing him over time!!