Reviews of My Vampire System by JKSManga - Webnovel

A Gem, i would place this novel with Lord of mysterious simply based on potential, the characters arent cutouts they make rational and irrational decisions that fit there character Im very happy that a new original has found its way to the top Pros Potential for the story to go anywhere Origional idea that has a unique spin on an monster system Stable uploads Im not able to guess the plot or what will happen next Cons I need more chapters and the chapters fly by due to this Give it a try, its intriguing where the story is progressing with little predictables that are a common turn off for the system oriented genre

I genuinely love the concept behind this, and the story in general. The reason for the 4-stars instead of 5, however, is the author's lack of proper punctuation. There are a great deal of run on sentences, and not nearly enough punctuation to even everything out. It's like the difference between saying "Let's go eat Grandma!" and "Let's go eat, Grandma!" As far as I'm concerned, the errors severely break the immersion, to the point where this story is more of a "sometimes" story, rather than an "all the time" story. Other than that, though, I love it :)

Very good story I like it a lot. I connect with some of the characters within the story as well. I also like how the author didn't make the characters super op, I'm in the early stages of the book tho

the plot definitely has some potential however, the pacing is killing me and... the characters. what happened to the characters so far, I can't seem to feel like the characters are alive they lack personality another thing is it feels like the plot if forced there are too many coincidences for which some are explained but they still lack some sense for me also, what happened to Vorden's personality? did the author decided to turn down hid obsessiveness because of the reader's comments?

i been reading it from you started this . protagonist is weak now .dude does he ever become a dracolich ?? and give him some ability at this rate the protagonist should be considered normal human . I expect something big from you as usual ...! don't let us down jks....!

I'm currently on chapter 1713. There is honestly way to much that has happened to truly write a short review here, so I'll just give thoughts on the overall WN. For this platform, this is a good story. However, if your use to books and web serials from other platforms, the WN scores low. Story wise, it's good. I think it was well thought out, planned, and depicted. It's about a human turned vampire as he slowly gains power to eventually rival the gods. It's told in a 3rd person omnipotent narrative where we hear the thoughts of other characters near the MC. I believe there are some improvements that need to be made to the narrative, although these thoughts might just be my bias towards this type of narrative. Character wise, it's honestly poor, at least in the most recent chapters. All female characters act the same, develop some kind of love interest in the MC and usually act shy about it, except for a few bold women. But the female characters don't feel real, they just feel like an accessory to the MC. Compared to WNs such as Beneath the Dragoneye Moons, it just shows that the story needs a bit more work. With writing quality, it feels very poor. There are many mistakes throughout all the chapters. It just feels rushed and like English wasn't the authors first language. About the story feeling rushed, I believe it's because the author doesn't have enough time. JKSmanga probably has to quickly right a chapter a day to fulfill webnovel's contract. Everything else is good.

I like the boo, but what I don't like is that the author is not updating it, and his other books are on pending for no reason please am being

I love this book and it's amazing.I love the way,that the story is organized and its extremely creative.would recommend anyone to read this story

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Its good for to pass time but that’s all it is. It’s extremely cliche and mind numbingly dumb most of time as the characters decisions don’t have much logical sense. slight spoiler: As soon as he learns he’s a vampire a girl figures it out, you might be think she must blackmails him then? No she becomes apart of his harem as she wants to be a vampire too. Least to say is that I’m disappointed that it has such a high rating.

At start it was okay but as i started to read it became so boaring until finally I stopped reading it mc is so boaring and I think you should have made vordon mc at least I think he looks more main than mc itself 🤦

Read it twice so far, and just finished it a third time. So now what do I do… Back to the beginning yet again. Amazing how we miss things when we get caught up in a great section. But there is too many great areas in this book!!!!!!!!

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This a 100 out of ten story the development makes you keep coming back I would recommend this to anyone who likes system stories or just a good story in general.

great book love to see more of this one of a kind exceptional book that I would read over and over again in my spare time love the work jks keep i up😀😀

mantap bgs cakep aman novel yg sangat bagus untuk di baca rugi tidak membaca novel ini , sangat seru pokoknya harus kalian baca memang pokok oke lah

Trash. Utter trash. No brains involved, no logic involved, no plot involved. utter garbage and trash. I seriously detest this “story”. It is painfully bad.

buku ini menceritakan tentang fantasi yang bagus dan terkesan menarik. semoga penulis bisa semakin berkarya dan membuat cerita menarik kedepannya 👈

good book. cerita seru dan selalu menghibur. terus penasaran dengan karakter utamanya yang keren dan selalu bikin penasaran. tetap semangat penulisanya. terima kasih

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The story is great, however, the background and tier system confused me. what is the difference between the the 1~8 tiers based on power level and MC(Mutant Points), or does it differ based on character. If u can do a index. Tbh, Can't wait for more.

I'm really in love with this novel because it's just amazing also the reason I gave it 4.8 was just because we need more chapters but it's the 1st book I'm giving all my power stone for this I'll appreciate if the other readers do this too but we need more chapters plz[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update] like this comment if u agree with me love u all

I would say it is very well written, just that recently, the writing has been rather…horrible. Possibly because the words are unrecognisable. Especially the chapter ‘Peter’s Plan’. It was undeniably the worst written chapter in the novel.

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