Reviews of My Vampire System by JKSManga - Webnovel

So far I have been loving this book. I read through all that was out in an afternoon. My blood was boiling at the end, asking for mooooaaaarrrrr. I literally have been looking for a vampire book just like this for so long. The way the system works, the way the character has embraced, but not been consumed by his vampirism, I’m fucking hooked. I love it. Okay so, rant over, actual review time. If you want a book that has strong potential to last up to the 1000’s of chapters without being boring through most of it? This is it. You been looking for an actually solid vampire book that isn’t about “boo hoo I’m a vampire” or “ **** I hate vampires let’s kill em” and actually has threshed out intentions behind actions, this is the one. The big upside, is that like other good authors, when the author realizes that he might have made a ****y wucky and made the next part of the book too hard for the character unintentionally , he gives the character a bit of plot armor the actually makes sense instead of a ****ty glaring armor. And when the author actually plans to make it hard for the character? Bam! Boi get slapped and stands back up. This is the book for you. You disagree? Your wrong. It’s for you. 🩸 🩸 🩸

Writing this review at 570, I don't know if I can continue reading this book, someone please give me the strength to keep reading, also please tell me Vorden doesn't get written out of the story as it looks like in the character popularity stuff. someone give me strength to keep reading via telling me the white knightery ending at some point, and don't say im wrong about the knighting chapter 570

After about 3 weeks of 3-4 hour reading each night, I finished the novel as a means to just combine three of my childhood favorite story topics. I grew up with shows like Buffy the Vampire Slayer and Angel, was at one point a game tester, and for the last few years, until recently, I was a computer teacher and tutor. This story off the get-go spoke to me as I began reading it. Writing Quality: As a former teacher, I can't help, but point out the grammatical and spelling errors throughout the book, but they aren't egregious. The point is still found in the story presented. Stability of Updates: I wasn't around for most of the initial run but as someone has done some writing in the past... I know it's no easy task to write over 2000 chapters continuously and consciously. Story Development: This was the most trouble I had with the story, but maybe that's because I'm a major DnD player who builds dynamic worlds. Overall early on and even into the middle chapters the story had moments of downtime... but once I hit the final saga especially right at the end of the arc that led into the final arc... I remembered vividly becoming angry because I just wanted the MC to have sometime with their found family and friends before rushing off to fight the end boss. Character focus for people other than the MC towards the end felt disappointing too. The ending, for me, was heartbreaking... Even in the end the MC wasn't able to enjoy the happy life he had fought so hard to make his. Character Design: I loved the different explanations of the Vampire/Demon/Creature breakdowns. Towards the end I was sad when several characters were made just to have somebody to throw away... and then the MC didn't have enough time to focus on the lives that were sacrificed for him. The descriptions for each character could have been a bit more in depth in the later chapters, but early on I felt what most of the characters looked like. World Background: The Multiverse is expansive and things were happening that weren't just from the MC's point of view, that takes a lot of skill to see things from multiple perspectives. Again most of my harsh rating is mostly due to last saga of the book, no real description of the places the MC visits past losing to his ancestor felt fleshed out enough. I don't want to spoil the final arc for those still reading either, but the ending just felt entirely too rushed even from the prespective of the multiverse.

Awesome, i dont have words to discribe, but will you make a volume 3? And will Quinn wake up from slumber? And what about the Ancient Ones? Will Quinn have the time to fight with them? How about Galen Talen? Will have his separate book? And how's strong is Rey Talen? And lastly Celestial Bliss told us that there is 3 Talen family who disrupt the prediction of her, whose the third?

I truly enjoyed this webnovel, and it holds a special place in my heart. It was, without a doubt, one of the best novels I've had the pleasure of reading. As I followed the journey of Quinn and his close-knit group of friends, I became emotionally invested in their growth from teenagers to adults. When some of them met unfortunate fates, it was an incredibly moving experience. I felt the sadness and the love they had for each other. The story had moments when I both loved and hated it simultaneously. The return of Quinn's departed friends to assist him added a bittersweet layer to the narrative. There were times when I couldn't help but shed tears. However, as the story progressed, and more characters met their demise, it became difficult to bear. The ending was heart-wrenching, with Quinn and his best friends facing tragic ends. It's unlikely that I'll come across another webnovel that can capture my emotions like this one did. The strong bond between Quinn and his friends was the highlight for me, as I have a soft spot for narratives that emphasize such bonds. I rate this webnovel a perfect 10 out of 10. I hope to discover another story in the future that can elicit the same attachment and emotions. Special mention to my favorite characters: Quinn, Layla Vorden, Sil, Fex, Logen, Arther, Leo, Peter, Erin (before she became an enemy), Sia, and Nate. These characters will forever stay with me, and even though more friends joined Quinn later in the story, these ones hold a special place in my heart. As the story took its heartbreaking turns, I found myself jumping between chapters, experiencing a rollercoaster of emotions. 💔😭