Goku Black Pov:
I floated in the darkness searching for a way out curse those mortals I was so close to eradicating all of humanity but no they wouldn't let me they denied me my right I angrily thought as I remember my humiliating defeat
-Flashback- Goku Black Pov:
I looked at Zamasu and spoke "What could have happened to you in order to feel so shocked we barely even started fighting what went wrong" I said in a serious voice as Zamasu looked at me as he spoke "It would seem we were wrong about these mortals they are more then just then just worthless insects in fact their powers are more dangerous then we thought if were not careful they could stop us from achieving our utopia" he said in a unnerving tone my eyes widen slowly as I looked back down on Goku and Vegeta I sighed as I spoke "Very well then no more games because of these insolent mortals that keep defying us we will show them the true power of a god" Zamasu then moved his potara earring to left both of our earrings start to glow as both of our bodies came together to fuse however we did not expect Vegeta to suddenly attack us as he suddenly yelled launching a Big Bang attack at our almost fused bodies causing the potara earrings to shatter but something unexpected happened the magic of the potara earring destabilized and ripped me apart from our almost fused body(our is for the Alternate Zamasu) and caused a huge wormhole to open and suck me inside of it leaving me to my current situation in this dark void.
Enraged at the memory I powered up and turned into my rose form hoping to find someway out but then my body started turn spiritual as I was launched from the darkness sending me through space and time I felt my spiritual body crash down onto something or was it someone I couldn't tell as I blacked out and the next thing I knew was waking up to the sound of someone speaking I could feel my body as I moved my head to look around it looks as though I am in some kind mortal school or academy but then I heard the voice of the scarred man as he yelled out "Team 7 Naruto Uzumaki, Sakura Haruno, and Sasuke Uchiha" after hearing the first persons name a blast of memories came at me as I clutched my head a bit no one seems to have noticed as I quickly recovered and started to surf through the memories and what I saw truly disgusted me
-end of chapter 1 part one -
So what do you guys think of part one of the rewritten chapter next part will be updated the only reason why I posted this right now instead of Monday was because I was kind of bored so yeah see yah all on Monday
also the Goku blacks soul will slowly merge with Naruto so maybe around the end or close to the chunin exams his personality and goal will slowly change don't get me wrong he will still kill mortals just not all of them but in a different way
So what you guys think ?