NEW START IN NEW LIFE NSINL

Good news, I finally finish my collage and now I'm finally a Bachelor of Economic (Sarjana Ekonomi). It's really a long journey for me... 6 years... and now I can do anything I want. I want to correct this trash I made in an attempt to learn English. So, I guess I should start with correcting on my many mistakes on grammar and stories... Thanks
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It's a Story about a man who died saving someone and given a second chance at a new life in The World God Only Knows world and there are also many characters from other anime. That sum this story.
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This is my first English story please understand the grammar isn't good enough. I did use Grammarly the free version though so I hope it can make my story more readable.
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Also please give me support with coffee here ko-fi.com/boy72 as I really need money soon to pay for my college. If you guys help me pay it I will be really grateful and post 5 chapters/day for 1 month.
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Rank 1-50 : 1000 Word/Chapter
Rank 51-100 : 900 Word/Chapter
Rank 101-150 : 800 Word/Chapter
Rank 151-199 : 700 Word/Chapter
Rank 200 : 600 Word/Chapter
Rank 200+ : Up to me.
It means it can be more or less as I like.
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The Update is always 2 chapters/day. And starting today the update will be at night time. At least in my place, it will be night. Don't really know about the other place's time. I finally have a new laptop that I manage to buy using my wage. So I guess you can expect my story on your library again.