Prosperity and Health System

Su Fang is the Son of the Su family who rules over the town "Immortal Ridge" one day while on he was injured in the forest, he awoke the Prosperity and Health System. He heals those in pain, and brings prosperity to the lands he visits. When he heals people the system will award him 'System Points' which he can use in the 'System Shop' to buy anything he needs regarding cultivation or healing. Now follow Su Fang as he travels the world and makes some unexpected friends and some enemies to ascend to heaven to become the God of Prosperity and Health.
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This is my first novel so critique me as you see fit, I want to know what you think I should improve in my story.