the Main Characters are all impulsive hypocrites, without any goals or dreams !!! Story development goes in random directions, following the impulses of the Main Characters. English translation needs improvement.
5 stars. My biggest complaint about this book was its writing quality but honestly the farther I get into the story, the easier it is for me to just ignore that and enjoy what’s happening. So I give it a 5 stars. This is my first time reading a story about a ridiculously Overpowered character but it’s so entertaining. Great work Author.
the review I wanted to make passed by my ears for now but I want to say a voupl of things in here , after reading 60+ chapters the story was wonderful beautiful but then it came chapter by chapter the Chinese slang story telling. Can you please tell me Mr. Writter why did you change the way you progressed with the story, why have clans and cultivation ? it was beautiful like 🎄 is when you were a child but you started writing like pretty much everyone does with cultivation novels. By the way internal cultivation is just crap, there's no power coming from it , and also there is something more powerful then lightning ⚡ which is Light , you can make lasers from it just so you know, and from the stuff the main character learns you choose to give lightning spotlight which is just crap. Footwork is not as powerful as teleportation or the speed of lightning and light no matter what you do. light is a constant no matter how fast you go, you cannot bypass it and so it's lightning. that was just my rant and something personally I don't like, not much of a review since is personal and not biased opinion, but I loved the first chapters, while I'm reading it I hope it goes better and not into Chinese novels ways of writing. this is my first review and don't smack me readers and Mr. writter.
I deleted my previous review since I read the newer arcs and decided to change up my review a bit.
The idea of the story as well as the story itself is really good.
The first arc, A New Beginning, is absolutely horrible, the entire arc is contradictory, sometimes its inconsistent, and the MC is simply irrational. If I had a choice I would skip it completely.
The second arc, Death for the wicked, is okay at best, there is nothing outstanding, but its not as bad as the first arc at least, he got a cool new evolution Dark ARK Parasite and all, even though I don't like the changes of the MC and the whole adopted kid idea, it is okay.
The third arc, it is way better than both the first and second arc, i suppose the author learned from past experiences which is pretty good. He goes to the underworld, kills some nerds, gets his child Saly back, and gets a powerful book (Book of the damned) and unlocks more of Zodiak's powers.
Fourth arc, pretty nice that he goes back to earth but I didn't continue reading as I don't want to use my fast pass' on the novel.
All in all, the idea of the book is pretty good, it was done okay, the first arc was horrible but quickly improved in following arcs, the MC is still not the smartest out there and still makes some irrational and dumb choices and lets emotions get the better of him. There is still some inconsistencies and a little bit of contradictions but it is WAY WAY less when compared to the first arc, also it is so small it is unnoticeable if you don't look for it like I did. I think it is mostly the first arc, aka garbage arc, that threw most people off and stopped them from reading. Gets better later on.
Would not recommend to anyone who is annoyed by contradictory stuff. As well as people who don't have the patience to push through the garbage arc. Also if you can't deal with a stupid MC who makes irrational choices 90% of the time, this is not for you. He marries a slave who has been raped by countless men and has an adopted child, so if your not in for that either, then yeah not for you. Otherwise knock yourself out.
It has potential but being hiven a very powerful ability at the beggening has kinda gotten rid of the action and chance if if he will lose so its kinda predictable, the story development just moves too fast, from the forest to demon girl to school all within the very first chapters.
This a very interesting book that makes me very intrigued, there are some problems like not much background of the MC b the 10th chapter, but I am sure it will come up later along with many adventures and other plot lines
i like this novel from the starring that how mc got cheat then killed and a chance well from indifferent to right path of story plus what i most like the paradox this novel story have and the cycle which a can't get out of to...👌👏👏
I would've continued if you didn't do all this separation arc shít. I'm very sensitive about relationships so them getting separated really turned me off. Its still a great story but I'm really not into separation
When reading about the MC’s background I felt like there is a lot of evil in this world but I felt happy that he was able to find someone who has had a similar experience with him. I just think that what he does is a little bit contradictory because he doesn’t like people who only care for looks and he ends up falling in love with her because of looks.
Well, where to start?
if you read till chapter 6 and dont drop it, good work. beacause the mc is an idiot.
he got some powerfull cheats and does nothing with them. he kill monsters for xp but does not steal their stats and skills. (thats his parasite power)
he farms lvls not stats and is wasting his time. he shouöd go to the next city and use the graveyard to power up. but no he is a stupid sh it.
laster he gets necromancy and does not use it. a horde of mobs to farm for you, that will bring you coroses to steal stats. noooo he doesnt use it at all.
his fist powerup is not through hard work, its dumb luck in finding a cave with op items, skillbooks and a corpse.
our mc is braindead and useless.
well thats it for the first 6 chapters.
i read on till chap16 and it does not get better....
he found a town some bandits and kiöled them. no stat steal again. ohhh he found he city. and we all hope he uses his abilities and uses them on the graveyard. he didnt even think about how to use them properly or how to power up.
idiot buys a slave for 2 million gold makes a nobel his enemie and later kill him. and again he steals no stats or skill from a fu ck ing nobel. he wasted any opportunity he gets.
a and he makes the chruch his enemie, but so what.
most important. for someone betrayed and killed by his wife he damn sure trusts his new freed slave pretty easy. tells her his skills, his race (parasite) and i dont want to know what else after not a week together and about 20 sentences exhanged betweem them.
2 star just for chapter lenghts and writing.
this story will kill you braincells and mood. stay away from it.
So do you remember when in ALADDIN Jafar was looking for the diamond in the rough well that's this book in a nutshell it start s off pretty bad but when you see what the author has in mind it grips you for sure
buena trama, esenarios detallados , personajes algo monotonos y muy similares, alto nivel de comprension literaria , podria mejorar el echo de desarrollar la historia, hay muchos momentos en la cual se estanca por mucho tiempo argumental
I've once rated this novel once before. I gave it an overall 4 🌟. but I only gave 3 🌟 the writing quality and story development. I only gave it an overall 4 🌟 because of the long chapters which I love and also the fast pacing. but it was actually just a 3 🌟 novel from a story perspective. but now I'm at ch 306 and the writing quality and story development have become soo much better. so I think it deserves 4 🌟 for them now.
it's sad that many new readers stay away from this novel due to low rating and bad reviews by people who only read the initial 10-20 chapters. for their defence, they were right about the first 100 or so chapters being very bad with a lot of plotholes, forced romance and stuff. but the author has improved a lot over writing this novel. And I firmly believe this novel deserves a way better rating than what it has now.
for the new readers, I recommend that you ignore the negative reviews for now and read atleast 100 chapters before deciding to drop it. Hey, it's just a suggestion. I believe you won't regret it.
And lastly, thank you author for writing this while make it improve a lot amidst facing constant insults and bad reviews. I would've never expected this much from a 4 🌟 rated webnovel.
I gave this book a try because the author of "shadow emperor in another world" ( check it out. awesome book btw. just have to keep in mind the later chapters get shorter) recommend me this novel when I said I love novels with long chapters. I saw a lot of negative reviews here and I was quite sceptical about the quality of the book. but I still gave this one a go. yes, they were right about the hypocrisy and stuff in this novel and the power levels are a mess. but this by no means deserve a 1 ⭐ or 2 🌟 s. this one has long chapters (I saw one over 60 pages long, so yeah it has long ass chapters), op mc, an average story, forced romance,etc. the typical stuff. so now you know what to expect.
Don't forget visit "shadow emperor in another world". the author is a really nice guy. and the story is better than this one.
While the writing quality and some of the Mcs descions arnt the best, I none the less love this book and is among my favorite Stories ive read. A few things can be done better, however i am by far not complaining, as I know personally how hard it can be to develop a story and any author who puts in Time, effort, and especially their blood, sweat, and tears, has my wholehearted and unconditional love and support.
-From an Aspiring Author
The sentences in this novel are convoluted, but still readable. The pacing is okay, and the story as a whole is still enjoyable. However, the romance is way too rushed and the characters become so out of character once the romance starts. It's as if Author-san wants to force the ML and the FL to be together, and the results are so cringey to read. Objectively speaking, after being tortured by his wife for months, I wouldn't be surprised if the MC had some sort of hidden trauma towards women, so it was very shocking to see the speed that the MC and the FL got together. But ignoring the romance part, the story as whole is still extremely good; it's just the romance that ruins the whole experience.