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Toby_Foxxer
Lovely webnovel, lots of references that are explained and described in ways that overtly yet also elegantly fit the world.
My biggest grip, like every other person, is the Hiatus and possible droppage by the translator, especially considering I accidentally dropped this novel Years back at chapter 710 and forgot I had read to this point so seing the 718 chapters exited me until I hot to chapter 700, read the part I had read before and then checked and realised it hasn't been updated in nearly 2 years.
The best part will always be the world building for me and not just including the various references but also tbe interaction with the system interface, npc interactions and the separate servers having their own advantages and disadvantages and would get smoothened after getting access to the Specialties of other servers.
But nothing really offsets the hatred I feel, at the world in general not the author, that its been nearly 2 years without a word
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Tyler_Marshall_0966
This book is fantastic. its fleshed out And has nods to popular cult Fiction favorites
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matti_Ding
The novel was quite refreshing because theres not a lot of novels with story of video game and guns.
the most upsetting thing is that the translators stopped translating because mtl. i wished that they would resume the translation because mtl translation really gives me a brain damage when trying to read few words. that is why i stopped reading so pls resume the translation
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JrrGBaro
When is the translation going to continue??????? ????????? ??????? ??????? ???? ????? ????? ??????????????????????? ?? ???????????? ????? ??
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MiasmaLotus
please continue to write, I'm loving the story just got to page 718 without even realizing it. your story has amazing potential and endless possibilities.
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DaoisttG3KuY
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Deletesystem32
What happened we know your on hiatus but its been a long time now. Im sure your readers would appreciate if you finished the story or if your done with it let us know.
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cerberus4452
is their going to be more chapters or is this story being dropped? .........................
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chakitoprito
NOVEL IS GOOD. CHARACTER PROGRESSION IS GOOD. SOME CHAPTER ARE SLOW BUT ITS OK. SO WHAT NOW AUTHOR-NIM? STILL ON HIATUS? ILIKE THE NOVEL SO PLEASE CONTINUE. LOL
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Erik_Rasmussen
Pretty bare bones at first. World background just keeps building; also Character development keeps a pace. Very interesting amalgamation of pop culture, transmigration, and sci-fi (throw in a little cultivation and pets). Author keeps pretty good action pace between online game world and βrealityβ.
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Jaccob_Aleander
Very well done so far. Some places are slower and take time but it is a fun read. I like the concepts used in the novel. Hope the novel keeps being updated in the future.
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Lazy_w
It has been 2 weeks since the last time a chapter was updated. Why have the chapter updates stopped? Did the novel go on hiatus? What happened?
Someone tell me what is going on!
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Thefreddygamer
Why did the updates stop??
Anyway the book is great while some arcs last a bit 2 long it is still enjoyable . The characters are interesting and the world doesnβt revolve around the Main char
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Evelcior
Its really good and itβs actually a good VRMMORPG novel. The world building in the games seem decent. But in MC real life not that much. It also kind of feels like the legendary mechanic
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Kratsel
Very fun and exciting story, but the fights and the MC's intentions are not that interesting, >There is no endgame goal or problem except for getting strong and all the enemies are quite stupid and overly aggressive while the mc is always smart and cool.
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ronueda
This would have been a good read if the numbers and names don't change so confusingly.
For example, it says Roaring Dragon Invincible is the leader of the group and in the next sentence after, it says Roaring Dragon Ruinous Star.
Another example is with the currency. A 30 million credit value becomes 3000 credits in the next chapter.
I don't know if it is the author messing it up or the translator is just butchering it. It's like someone put the story in MTL then improved the structure and grammar, then every few chapters, someone else who hasn't read the previous chapters does the editing.
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Hqmza_
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lbaro97
This is a great story. Nice plot, few clichΓ©s, only some spelling error. There is however one thing that is seriously getting on my nerves: the numbers. The author and/or translator is confusing billions with millions and thousands. The values of different currencies are changed around frequently and there is absolutely no consistency with item prices. It simply scratches me the wrong way.
However, apart from that I can only recommend this story to everyone.
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Iamkrazycat
I read this novel on a poorly thanslated websited (but has way more chapters) and i want to say that i loved every second of it and i need to stress how god afwul some novels are on those website and i cant tell you enough that unless you absolutly love the novel you will hate it reading it there.
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WhiteMist
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cerberus4452
One of my best novels to read in my favorites list β€ π π please make more π and keep it π― now for the exp................................
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NotErlkonig
I love this book, so far. It has an interesting take of the VR game area of books. And the world and characters are explained wonderfully. The way that the characters interact with friends and foes seems real and not fake or made up.
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vPercy
ehh.............................................................................................................................................................
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Anon343
Bad translation. The novel, when taken on its own strength alone, is basically good enough to read for someone with proper standards, but the bad translation pulls it down beneath that line. The weirdest thing is that at first blush the translation doesn't really appear to be poor, but the more you read, you get a sense that it's just not very satisfying: sentences are not plainly wrong that ofte, but they're written in a confusing way that makes it much more of a chore than it has to be to read.
Beyond that, there's also more plain errors that let you know it's ESL: accesories are called 'visual equipment', aggro is called 'violence', grinding is called 'training', etc. I just wish the translation was better because the book is decent enough.
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00_darkness_00
nonsense ...................................................................................................................................
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TacoKun
This novel is so good to be true, can't take my eyes away from this. It feels like heaven to read, I wanna read it so much. If this novel got some drive, then thanked God its still alive. This novel is so good to be true, can't take my eyes away from this.
I need this novel like it's quite all right. I need this novel to warm my lonely nights. Just read this novel, cause I... say...
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