Goodhunter has written yet another great story. I wasn't sure if he'd pull off an original work but so far I'm really impressed. I'll keep following this story, see where the evil main character's going.
The quality is excellent, same, sometimes even better than Bloodborne.
Updates are regular.
Most characters introduced lack something, but given it's only the beginning of the story, I'll wait and see.
That's all I have to say for now. Keep them coming Goodhunter
Well I finally caught up and this novel, wow is it good. Iโve read quite a bit of novels and books in my time and the snippet I have gotten from this novel ranks pretty high up there. This novel is so underrated, people need to read this. Thank you Goodhunter for blessing myself and all the other readers with this refreshing and well written piece of literature. I sincerely hope you get the attention you deserve. :)
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As far as I have read, the novel is quite interesting. There were very few grammatical errors, and the author did a good job with conveying the ideas in the story! Good work!
The story is great .. I read now intil chapter 130 ..but there is no explanation of the Essense system, I dont understand at what level the MC is and how he learn the spell and how many level In the Essense system and The name of the level the MC is
Im gonna give this a good chance, I mean I have been looking for a goodย reading for awhile and this has a story that was able to stir my interest. I think thats GGRRRREEEATT๐ฏ I will find this to be a good read in the end right? ๐๐๐๐ณRIGHTโ๐ค๐ค๐๐๐๐๐ฅฐheehee
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Black eyes us really really weird
And his powers are kind of mad buh
The Cane guy is confusing me
The writer just keeps calling him bear
That's actually kind of confusing
Well thought out character Development, world building and everything else I can't elaborately explain. But what I can explain is that this, in my opinion, this is one the best novels on the site.
Lame and clichรฉ, once doing an anti-hero was something different now it's the norm on webnovel and it's not even done with originality, they all have the same stupid and pretentious mentality.
And don't get me started that nobody seems to know that there is a difference between an anti-hero and a villan, if you write about a fu**ing sociopath with the same dumb reason every time it's not an anti-hero.
And this is just the tip of the iceberg, but it's not worth continuing.
Good story nothing more nothing less.*********************""""**************""""""***********""""_________*"*"*"*"*"*"*"**** the more than 140 rule is pathetic
Hi, i just read few chapters and its really good.
I'm curoius about Is there a relationship with the previous novel?
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Hello there ladies and gents. Author here encouragingly rating his own story. You might find the events at first pretty slow but it is done to bring the setting into light. Hera is a pretty big planet, hiding all manners of secrets.
I drew my inspiration from video games, great stories like LOTR, A Song of Ice and Fire and Harry Potter. You'll find some wuxia references, but I've kept it to a minimum. I haven't read too many of those I'm afraid.
For now, I can only post one chapter per day since I have a regular job to go to and other responsibilities to attend to.
It's funny, it's fantastic, and it's intriguing. I'm really excited to see where this first arc is going. I like the flashback part which is differentiated by the narration in first person.
A chapter is uploaded every day. They're long enough and quite eventful. There's always something to get you asking questions. The author does a good job hiding his secrets. More chapters Goodhunter. We demand moooore
Good read, I recommend it to anyone looking for something new. More chapters mister author. kdljshgkjdfhmgdsjhmksdjhmksdhmkjgsdlรนkdsmkjfdknjvdffdlkgmlf
Zedd seems like a narcissistic asshole if you ask me. I wonder why the author chose him to be the main character. I like how OP he seems to be though. So far Zedd had left an "impression" on me. I'd love it if the author could give us more chapters, twice a day perhaps?
I hope the mc doesn't turn up into a whiny little brat. He seems level headed and pretty smart.
Updates are stable. The language used is simple to understand. Keep up the good work goodhunter.
I've followed Goodhunter through Bloodborne, and now through the story of Black Eyes. It's intriguing to say the least. I don't know what Zedd's real motives are but I'm interested enough to keep coming back. Give us more author san.
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