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Denn_Editor
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Sid_K
omg em in love with this novel 😍❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️ refreshing story, good character building,... ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
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tanya28
the story was good it was fast paced only there are grammatical errors but just ignore it since it's still understandable I like how the FL and ml develop their feelings for each other just a little bit sad because the story was short but anyway i had a good time reading it.
LV 5
evelist
The story is so~ good. I finished it in 2 days.
Love how the relationship of the family and siblings. lovey dovey of the couple. And i don’t find it boring to read every chapter. 😆🥰👍🏻👍🏻
Will read your other stories.
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Mimky
Give this novel a try on whether you like it or not. I personally liked it but there are some holes at the end of the story. Like why the Ling family's woman always die early or about Ling Fend and Xi Jian's promise/secret. Anyway, this story is pretty good and I liked it. 🧡💛
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Staci_Hoo
i really loved the storyline and the characters, it was such a great and enticing story. as i read, i could envision it with my impact and it made me want to read it more and more. thank you author for all your hard work.
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Rurijichann
This was quite a good novel. Although there is alot of grammatical errors and alot of tense mistakes, still, it was a good read. Nothing an editor could not do :D I love the conflicts and twists of it. Refreshing. Not too heavy, no major misunderstandings and no evil in-laws or family members. Not much dog food aswell for ML and MC, I guess. 😂 I love the sibling love with the Lings. I just think everyone baby-ed the MC too much. Especially during the major kidnapping. I thought that she has some skills because during the 7 year she was abroad, it was mentioned that she went to martial lessons with Huangsheng. It would’ve been nice to see her in action even if abit. Especially since she’s a great lawyer too. She only had that one instance wuth the scum lawyer in the beginning after that there’s not much action for her.
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zhakim90
i really like the strory..
its simple
not too much scams
not many misunderstanding
and there is not many villain. kkk
after all.. i like it because the story its simple. enough chapter so i don't felt bored when read this story. im kind of fed up with the loooooooong story.
and the most important thing that really good is, this novel was not locked. so can read it free. kkk
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Daoist763858
updates soon slow! story is fine i guess but the FL keeps calling her husband brother like tf? also the flashbacks are awfully confusing and weird. like I said updates are so slow,takes about 2 weeks for a chapter..
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dreamyPrincess
Dear author please update story... We are missing it... Story is nice and lovely... But you don't update it how will we know further... Please update it soon
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Brenda_Chan
Great storyline so far, haven't put it down since i started reading it. I can't wait for the rest of the series, anyone know of its release date?
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Emilia03
This book is superb. I am looking forward to how it'll end . And oh my god the suspense is just heart wrenching .thank you for writinv this book. I found it accidentally when i was browsing for any good books. Update soon .✴
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priya85
Please update more frequently
I love xi jian 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍🤗😍😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
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ColdWQ
The author is great with the writing and with story telling and I’m a author too with great inspiration from others authors. 👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻☺️😊
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dydy177
First of all i found this novel accidently and still excitedly waiting for updates every day because i tell you this novel is a hidden gem the story is really good with a little bit mystery and stuff.. i wonder how can this novel still not rate enough i mean for me it's better than other stories here in webnovel so try it guys i'm sure you won't regret it.. good job author-nim and keep fighting!!!
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Unique_Yishah
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Joyowhor
The story is good.. but please author... Stop making her wear outdated clothes.. She's the Fl and her current disposition should show confidence as a lawyer and someone who has overcome bullying... Her brothers are too controlling, making her dress stupidly to hide her beauty.. who does that????
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YaraMinami
Oh I shamelessly give my own handworks a review😂😂😂 I'll delete it asap IF this book reaches another twinkles under the title 😊 Plz kindly leave some review or comment below.
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Red_Delin
Fast paced and full of fun. You can't help but just love the ML adn FL. Character and plot development is well thought out. Highly recommended
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Satya_TriZnawanti
I wish I had a brother like those three. Is there another story about Ling Huansheng? I'd love to read about him. The main character really like playing a 'tsundere' role. Go on tsundere king!
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Sam42
This is a unique story. Overprotecting brother and SECRET admirer .Nice one . Hoping for more update/Not a typical romance novel.love this novel
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