I read Agatha Christie, Edgar Allan Poe, Conandoil,
Gilbert Keith Chesterton, Wilkie Collins. But I don’t really like this genre, but Detective Conan is funny. I hope the author will have interesting stories. And so let's go.
Interestingly, deduction still wraps around in the 21st century? Wouldn't it be easier for them to buy the Criminalist's handbook and find out the basics of the detective?
I wonder what kind of insertion is this language, I suppose "taganlog"? Then you need to put * and give a description or write a translation in brackets. Not knowing the language, hard to read. It is probably better to write in the text in English, and quotes in another language may not be inserted too often.
I have read the prologue and the first chapter, but it seems that the subsequent ones abound in the frequent use of a language other than English. I think that in the synopsis this should be indicated immediately so that the reader knows about this in advance.
It is difficult to evaluate the novel in three chapters, I hope the author will be able to somehow resolve this issue. Since this is a swap review, I will not focus on some problems, so I’ll probably tell an interesting story. Good luck to the author.