This novel is truly a breath of fresh air. It combines a real cultivation world and a virtual one interestingly. A hidden gem in my opinion. I hope more people could review and vote for this great novel ;) Keep up the good work author!
It's a really nice story, nice character development. I hope that the gaming part gets a bit more structure, I would suggest the writer to refer The King's Avatar on writing the gaming side of the story. But I am ready to accept all these little short comings hoping that the writing will get better as the story progresses.
To sum it up it's a great work and I recommend everyone to read atleast 30 chapters before dropping this book.
Honestly I kept skipping this book when it cam up on my recommendations. I regret tgat I kept skipping it because this is a really good book. At first the writing was a bit touchy in places, but it got better over time. The story plot is really good as well. I still have not found out what the brother's IGN is yet, and I cant wait. There are times where I think there was too much information overload. For example, seeing all that information on his status. Other than that the story flows really well.
At first, I liked the novel, but after the time-skip, the MC forgets all his serious personality and edge and becomes the everyday pushover that never complains or gets angry even if he is beat-up for no reason.
Then we have the non-sensical traits of the novel world. We have a 'complex' world with many groups, organizations, and families, and yet, every time someone attacks the MC we NEVER see a guard or police, be in the real or game world.
Every time something stupid occurs, the author tries to push a chapter's worth of info dump, as if trying to hide or just make use of something already messed. Sorry, but as interesting as the story appeared, I found it impossible to continue this.
There are other points that lost points with me too, but since I'm dropping this before my default margin of 30 chapters, I will leave out.
although it drop from favorites list because of how dense the mc is and i hate dense mc's im suprise at my self that im still reading it. the novel it self is pretty good the grammer, plot,..... is super good you guys should give it a try
The start was good as it makes me curious about the story. As the story progresses, I became quite unsure of where it it really going. I just know that Shin is the mc. The end. Also, I don't like that big sister who acts like a bully.
dark of night and waxing moon
come to us a single pool
hear us sing our witches' song
and send us moonlight clear and strong
earth and water, wind and fire
one and all you must conspire
to banish bad for goodness sake
cos I need moonshine for my cake
weary travelers long ago
shared their bread and made a vow
that they will be forever friends
and so shall be until time ends
AlmOst all is allright except the penAlties oF the devs , how come the game allows the player to cReate skills then punish tHem for not reportng cheating plus at some point it was saiD he was to learn the free mode yet implying it would boost his capabilities but nothing on that so far after the revelation ?
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it reminds me of Realm of myths and legends, which I realy enjoy. Main character starts of weaker so it brings you Along the ride more and gives more of a feeling of the World and the characters themselvea
i love this book.
Every girl in this novel is annoying and unreasonable as hell
Number 1 in dark organization training became pathetic loser when he grew up older that get pushed around by girl
I'm in chapters 26 and will change the review once I see improvement
guys lets write more reviews for this awesome novel and try to increase the exposure. I found this novel through the recommended list but I think it would be best if everyone wrote more reviews and spammed their power stones :)
certainly a novel with great potential. the fights are well written and immersive, but the grammar could use some work. overall a great novel, kinda curious as to why more people aren't writing reviews. increase the exposure for the novel guys, to help support the author!
a great novel with a satisfying combo of cool traits from other novels. the wuxia aspect of the real world and the virtual world are combined seamlessly. although, having more RL battles could be more beneficial :) keep up the good work, hope more people vote and write review for the novel
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It was a great pleasure to meet your story.
Hands one the best original novels i have ever read. I couldn't stop reading it forbthe last three days until I got to the latest chapter. The way the author weaves the story of real world with the VR world is seemingly beautiful. 5 🌟