The commander of death

James Moore Aka' the commander of death this nickname was given to him by his fellow soldiers of the U.S army after several years of constant overwhelming victory's.
the U.S decides to go back into isolation and so the well respected captains plans to retire and get married and start a family little does he know the goddess of death has been watching him over years waiting for the right moment to send him and the U.S army to another world to set it straight.
apon meeting him the goddess falls deeply in love with him and forces him to in to marriage with her little does he know his true power and the troubles of the other world he and his comrades have been sent to


P.S this is my first novel so please comment on my work it helps a lot