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The Concession

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Author: Taiwolilly

4.82 (34 ratings)

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~He gave himself up to save her~

He made the wrong choice now he had to pay the price.

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Careful little princess, careful little boy what you choose, for to consent, is to lose.

The dragon's mouth is wide, filled with bones. It reeks of death and human flesh.

With gold and diamond, he lures you in.

He has beady pearls-flames for eyes,

And like a sheep to the slaughter, you're served on a platter.

He never gets enough; for like a lion, he goes about seeking whom to devour—his sole desire.

So children, run, keep your concession,

Or ye might be next. Ye have been warned.

Remember this tale...the serpent never sleeps.

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    Daoist_Culture

    Interesting synopsis ,i ll add you to my library:). Hope it will be some evil MC +harem (well i only read those weird types XP) . See ya in the comments.

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    Tiphereth

    the use of square root symbols to separate paragraphs in the synopsis is what gave this novel an immediate ten out of ten for me, no questions asked

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    Afolabi_Mubarak

    Being a fan of the mysterious and supernatural, I cannot help but shout I LOVE THIS BOOK! Right from the first well-described scene, it grips you like a magnet and keeps you wanting more. I am surely gonna add this to my library.

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    Daoist4Wknb5

    This book is amazingly intriguing and elaborate, the writer explained deeply the thoughts and surroundings of the story. The words were explicit to understand.

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    Maine_21

    Wow! Red a few chapters and I'm already in love with this book🥰 This is one of those books that I would highly recommend. Kudos to the author. You have made a great job💖

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    Oracle17

    This book is beyond amazing, as someone who has been following the book prior it being here, I have to say the Author is a pretty talented one. Suspense, mystery, supernatural? It's got it all!💯💯❤❤💃

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    Taiwolilly

    Hey, Author here😊. This is my third book and the journey has been great so far😉. You my wonderful readers have been so awesome, voting, commenting and contributing. Thank you ❤❤😊 This book is a book like no other, it invokes emotions in you that gets you thinking about life and the things just beneath the surface that are invisible to the average human, of a world different yet similar to ours. This book is about a man named William who got more than he bargained for, at the cost of his own soul. Follow his not so pleasant journey to freedom. Sometimes in order to save something precious, people end up losing more than they're trying to retrieve. This is William's story. . . . . "To consent is to lose..." #spiritual #thriller #mystery #evil #good #Christ #God #heaven #hell #angel #love #despair #angel #darkness #light #freedom

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    Lillyino

    Well the synopsis drew me in and i had to see more,i must say. Pens down, this book is amazing, the whole supernatural, religion thing got my attention. I'm diffinitely reading for more Good job Author.

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    Clarisse_Alfaro

    Wow. I am really amazed. The sypnosis really hits me hard. I am amazed of how good the author is. It is very interesting and I am loving it. This story is not just a simple one, come on, this is a very rare one and this is a masterpiece.❤

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    Daoist1rIi0M

    I love how the synopsis is beautifully written and I’m gonna add this book to my library because I love to see how it ends. Good job Author!

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    Dugzaw

    The synopsis was what drew me in. It had a rhythmic tone and I found myself almost reading it like a poem. I commend the writer for tackling I horror genre; it is challenging to do so. The Brief Preview set up an idea of what the rest of the book will be like. I am worried for Will and I am scared to encounter the Devil again. Great work!

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