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The Deity's curse

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Author: daygon_yuuki

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(ABO, Fantasy BL) At the apex of his rule, Kaito dies cursing his once best friend. He believed that Noah was the reason for his wife and child's death. Only after his death did he know the truth - he was never betrayed and had jumped to conclusions too early.

Now born centuries later, the Alpha king, the very founder of the Seni family finds himself in a circle of regret and redemption as he come to know that Noah has been delt with a fate worse then death as a guardian deity.

The new life should give them a new start. Keito vowed to be better this time around and leave the past behind. But both the fate and his wolf do not want him to and he had to face it one way or another.

'If he won't man up and realsie just whom he loved then I'll do it myself for both if us" Ryu the wolf

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    daygon_yuuki

    The author here. Hope you are enjoying this and won't forget to add this to your collection and vote for it. It makes me happy and helps out a lot too.

    3yr
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    save_ME

    I love the whole concept and I love your writing so I'm dropping this s star right here. I've read till the end you've posted and await more in time.

    3yr
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    2s12
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    Honestly, the starting was a little iffy but by the time 4 chapter comes around it's gotten so interesting that I'm actually looking forward to more of such goodness to come

    3yr
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    DeepBlueSea_3181

    The story has a realy good beginning with the promise of interesting characters and a story with depth and mystery. But halfway through the author lost his/her interest in the work. So many typos. using the wrong names for the characters. Copy and paste 2 or 3 passages of the last chapter to push up the wordcount. In the End the use of completely wrong words so the sentence is incomprehensible. And there a lit of plot holes. Such a waste. 😭

    2yr
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    Zoey_234

    The recent chapters are really interesting and completely changed my mind about the whole story. Before it was a 3/5 for me, 3.5 with stretching it but once I reached chapter 15, it was really good

    3yr
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    Fantastic_24

    Really interesting so far. The development and direction us fantastic and I find myself looking forward to how you would unfold such a story

    3yr
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    JesReadin

    This was an interesting story that covered centuries of events that shaped the lives of the main protagonists, Kaito and Noah. With powerful beings and deities, magical creatures and demons, mysteries of the past and their influence on the present day, it was an ambitious undertaking by the author. And for all I enjoyed it, for me it seemed that the author let the story evolve in directions that didn’t allow for everything to make sense or be resolved. Things that seemed important inthe beginning like the curse uttered by a dying Kaito in one life seeming to have such dark consequences for Noah but that never really got addressed. In fact, the author made the reason for Noah’s presence seem to be of his own need for penance, but it was insanely extreme and often abusive and lasted so long that, that reason made no sense. And abusive grandpa never faced a consequence.. that really irked me. Then there was so much time spent on others relationships, and so much time apart for the MCs and over all those centuries we just got a couple of gentle encouragement kisses in a fight scene. Hmm now I start listing it, there was quite a bit of disappointment lol. But I did like it, I just think it could have been shorter and more cohesive. And if this was a love that defied the ages, could they be on the same page about it for more than 2 chapters? Seriously 😅 Oh and a fair amount of distracting typos, pronoun errors, verb errors, name mix ups.

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    LuluoO
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    It is slow burn. This novel is just different. Without common cliche. You just can't judge it by common sense. It's a mystery you'd want to unravel

    3yr
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    69_otterbatch

    Wow, I really did not think I would enjoy this as much as I did. I do really want to know what would happen next so can you please drop a hint?

    3yr
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    All_about_beans

    The deeper I get here, the more i like it which is a really good thing for me. I can see the story develop and not stay stagnant which is big plus

    3yr
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    Sara_Seni

    I find this story fascinating. It's a fun read and the mystery is really well set up till now. Even if we don't know much yet, I have a feeling that when we do it'll be great

    3yr
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    Fish_Fantasy

    this is getting better and the recent chapter is the best. can't wait for even more of this goodness. Please post as much as you are comfortable with

    3yr
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    DenmaiLover

    The very premise sounds interesting and I'm really looking forward to where you actually take it. Maybe the rating will change in the future once I get through all the chapters but for now, I'm really looking forward to reading this

    3yr
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    2_Do
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    I love the idea all together and I wish to read more of this. Also, please recheck your grammer a little. it doesn't bither me a lot but it might bother other people

    3yr
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    Otter_Batch

    I love everything about it and I'm not afraid to say it. I hope you do really well in WPC this one because it's genuinely engaging story and I can already start to see it take shape

    3yr
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    iamhere1

    It's been 5 chapters and I can already tell that it's shaping up to be a really in depth story with a lot of good characters we could enjoy .

    3yr
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    zeroawes

    here from recommendations. it's really good and good luck for the competitions. Hopefully you do well and remember, I'm with you all the way

    3yr
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    7792
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    so good. so good. so good. so good. I need more of it and fast. so good. so good. so good. so good. I need more of it and fast. so good. so good. so good. so good. I need more of it and fast.

    3yr
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    Roe_Doe
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    I would vote if there was an option but alas there is none. Hope you win this so that we can get a lot of chapters as a result and this wonderful story

    3yr
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    Trees_Cgae

    Really, really like this work. its addicting but I find such stories to be attract me after all. I'll gladly take anything you dish out at me

    3yr
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