/ Eastern / The First Immortal of Destiny
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Shen Mo has transmigrated to a cultivation world. After learning the memory fragments of the original body owner, he finds that cultivation in this word has already been hard enough without being held back by his poor talent. Just as Shen decides to give up cultivation, he awakes the Destiny System:
[Destinied Lord: Shen Mo]
[Talent: Mediocre Talent]
[You spent 1 Destiny Point, tried to enhance your Talent, and succeeded.]
[Talent: High]
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Thanks for the Book!!!!! ๐ฅ ๐๐พ Let me be give you all five stars for all five categories for your new book, Author-san ๐๐๐๐๐ We are all looking forward for the next chapters ๐ฅฐ๐๐
Thanks for the Book!!!!! ๐ฅ ๐๐พ ๐๐๐๐๐ We are all looking forward for the next chapters ๐ฅฐ๐๐
Generic op mc who has so many opportunities shoved down his throat that you turn numb to it. Translation: Pretty bad. The titles for his mastery of his various abilities are inconsistent and some of the actions are reversed, e.g. โadvancingโ from โseniorโ to โjuniorโ. Update stability: Just read stuff in one day so no idea. Story development: There really isnโt any. Itโs just the mc moving from one opportunity to another. Character design: Just generic hollow mc who is inconsistent yet always right. Sometimes he acts conservatively and other times heโs reckless but because heโs the mc itโs always the same outcome, he gets another advantage. Everyone else is just a passerby. World background: Generic. The mc hasnโt really moved around or interacted much so other than his personal interactions with a small number of people itโs not really descriptive.
mediocre storyline, garbage translation, scummy mc with plotlines. not worth to read
Mediocre plot, MC has a cheat that lets him boost his innate talents and obtain special talents. Built in proficiency panel as well. The MC was just average to me in that he was pretty generic but on his first task to slay beasts he blamed the task givers for giving inaccurate information that they had no way to know about and used it as an excuse to scam them out of more rewards when he didnโt even finish the job. Scummy mc.
Thanks for the Book!!!!! ๐ฅ ๐๐พ Let me be give you all five stars for all five categories for your new book, Author-san ๐๐๐๐๐ We are all looking forward for the next chapters ๐ฅฐ๐๐