The Goal System

Lucas Wheaton was your average joe. He worked as a Business Analyst for a regular company, being paid a modest sum. He had two cats and lived in downtown Toronto in a cheap studio apartment. His life was average to say the least. That was, until he woke up in an alleyway with no recollection of how he got there. Suddenly, a mechanical voice appeared in his head, “Welcome Host! You have been selected to receive the wonderful goal system!” The words echoed in his head. Using this new system, Lucas would conquer this new world of magic and blades with guns and grenades. But first he had to find a place to stay.

This is my first novel, and English is not my first language. Please let me know where and how I can Improve. Thank you for reading.