The Origin of the Cosmos The Origin

Story about Primal Chaos first Origin Primal System.
1. It has sub systems like Tribe, Clan, Sect, Kingdom, Bloodline system, etc
First few chapters are very fast and confusing filled with grammatical mistakes hopefully it will improve.
2. I will try to make romance less generic as possible and will add a bit of modern romance environments.
3. Sorry for story's power scale being unbalanced right now but by end of vol 1, I will balance it out to make future power scale unbalanced again.
4. Interactions is a bit problematic because of confusion in first, third person, and narration.
5. Its has harem, romance, etc it will later have more on martial art comprehension.
6. Sorry but cultivation upgrade will always be fast.
7. Will try to add humour.
8. I am writing this as I want to write a story of my imagination as I felt many things are left out in the novels I read.
9. And please join discord and give ideas and help me writing the story things you want to add.
10. My last updated chapter will always be incomplete and it will be completed when next chapter will get uploaded.
11. Criticism are always welcomed but please do it with while pointing my mistakes out exactly so that I can correct myself.

Adventures to the peak of existence He who is revered as LOrd of aweSomeness.

I am a science student writing literature so please give me forgive my mistakes, support and give ideas on my discord.
discord; https://discord.gg/EnsFuvm