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The System's Hold Over Me

Realistic 88 Chapters 135.4K Views
Author: kevin_gauntlet

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[The first fifty chapters are basically, a slice of life. MC walking his own pace. The story gets serious after some time.]
[Three chapters a week!!]

Frizz never really had any big ambitions, yet he was never content with his life. He longed for excitement but lacked the motivation to look for one.

After recently graduating college. He squandered his opportunities, wasting his potential. An unmotivated, lazy, and boring person. Effort was an alien concept to him, preferring to idle by.

Then an opportunity arrived. A system and but that's it. No gates opening, no mystical equipment, no fantastical monsters, and no gods with schemes.

Just a cold, mechanical interface in a world drowning in mundane horrors: corruption, crime, and the soul-crushing grind of life.

For the first time, he’s wide awake and with the System's perks, he's ready to smash his dull life to the ground. However, he's not the only one playing this game…

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kevin_gauntlet

Biased review, since I am the author Also, please tell me if there are any errors in my novel, I hate errors. I would love to correct them as soon as possible.

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Freya_Mill

Hello, I had the pleasure of reading your story recently, and I must say I thoroughly enjoyed it. Your writing style is remarkable. If you don’t mind me asking, how long have you been writing?

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harper_kelly

Hi! I just wanted to say your story has such strong cinematic energy, it plays like a film in my mind. I’m a comic artist and I couldn’t help but imagine how stunning it’d look visually. If that ever interests you, I’d love to talk about how we could make it happen as a commissioned project. You can reach me on Discord (harper_clark) or Instagram (_harperr_).

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