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4.3

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Dominion_Sage
Hello, Author here, This is my first time writing a novel so I hope you like it. I know that there are a lot of improvements that I can make so I would appreciate it if you could write down what I can do to improve the story and give suggestions for the story.
2yr
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Phil_Bob
Great novel, has high potential and isn't as predictable as many others of it's genre are. A joy to read and is very entertaining. I would like to request the author to post more often, not twice everyday but maybe a extra chapter if the novel gets over 50 votes in a week. (Yes I just want more chapters. Fight me.)
1yr
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Dominion_Sage
There has been a new discord server made for the novel. In there you can give me feedback and suggestions for the novel. You will also be able to help me choose which novel cover I should use and make suggestions for the cover. Discord link - https://discord.gg/h566zub I know that some people hate it when authors rate their books. I made this review just to share the discord. I will delete this comment after a week or so just so it doesn't get on the nerves of the people who hate it when authors rate their books more than once.
1yr
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Priyam_Patel_9939
Sage wake up dude we need more and long chapters Story was progressing completely fine why did you stop Just start writing dude ..........
4mth
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YouTube_Hero
Super funny and amazing novel please more chapters 😊😊😊 keep writing πŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘
6mth
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Priyam_Patel_9939
please quickly release new chapter. this novel has potential to become popular in future please don't stop. please please please don't stop we are really starting to love this novel
7mth
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JaymZei
Although the updates are slow, it is a really good read. It has a unique feeling than other novels i read here. Kinda like how fast foods good but a home cooked meal is better. Keep up the good work! this will be my new favorite read^^
10mth
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MIKAKI
slow updates and chapters too short, other than that a good concept but the characters feel too unnatural like in this 2 last chapters the "Boss" accepted the "SYSTEM" way too easily (I'M NOT NATIVE ENGLISH SPEAKER SO PLEASE PARDON MY MISTAKES)
10mth
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Vahh
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I don't know what to say but the story is good. There are many novels that are good in the beginning but get worse as events progress and this novel to pass the time and I did not spare an effort to read it and here I have finished it
11mth
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MV_Cookie
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11mth
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Jkesse
theres no emotion or depth, its very bare. every chapter needs more. the chapter i just read "killers" felt flat. he broke their arms and legs, and chased after the ones who ran away just breaking their legs and disarming them. then sophia called the police and they left. that isnt word for word. but its pretty close. no fight scene. no drawn out police questions. the way it reads it was over in less than 5 minutes from start to them leaving. you could double or possibly even triple the length of this book with details.
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1yr
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AsianLadyBoy
Sucks that he has dropped this since he has not p[posted a single chapter in 8 months. I was really enjoying where everything was going, except for the really small chapter size. Towards the later chapters, it started to remind me of a novel that did not get picked for translations that was about someone being the Admin of a rich people chat group. He would invite rich people into the chat group and they would be able to buy amazing cultivation items for real-life cash. And the MC would be the benefactor of the money. But in this one, he invites a few people into a part of a system. It's really only the cash shop of the system. And that would allow them to buy items for real-life money. The world also started to change into a cultivation world and more random people were about to get a shop system. Basically, the world was becoming pay to win. And I was looking forward to more. Sadly I was disappointed in the end. This would be a 4.5-star novel if it was not dropped.
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1yr
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jayden13
please continue...this book was great . ........................................,,,,,,,,,,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,.,..,..,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,
1yr
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Areyoulostquestion
Writing Quality - 4 I like how the author writes. Stability of updates - 3 Eh not really updating like it used to Story development - 5 Honestly why not?
1yr
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ocean_man112
Continue this book its fantastic im still waiting for another chapter
1yr
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Sagewolf1975
It would be fun to upgrade stuff. A better car, a better house, and a better weapon to defend myself with. πŸ™‚πŸ™‚πŸ™‚πŸ™‚πŸ™‚πŸ™‚πŸ™‚πŸ™‚πŸ™‚πŸ™‚πŸ™‚πŸ™‚πŸ™‚πŸ™‚πŸ™‚πŸ™‚πŸ™‚πŸ™‚πŸ™‚πŸ™‚
1yr
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DanielBR
it starts and ends, it doesn't stop in the middle it gets boring.................................................................................................
1yr
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ocean_man112
Fantastic book i just wish it would update ive been waiting for a month now and No update
1yr
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Daoist1rvBov
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1yr
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zayatiqui
are u not updating anymore??? plz i like this novel i want more chapppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppter
1yr
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1yr
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Doverow
A pretty good light read when you want time away from the hard read. I wish for 1000 more chapters. Author really nice novel a lot of things I would have done the same and a lot of things I would have done differently, but overall it is amazing.
1yr
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biplav_subedi
The more powerful you are the more freedom you are the more shameless your are the more controlling you are He will ruin the company he must
1yr
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Dakotatoni
great story overall thought the detail is missing i have to fillllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllll the 140 characters needed to post
1yr
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Biplav_Subedi
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1yr
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Oofwa
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Hey author, I'm sure that this story is definately not a remake of 'Ill add points to everything' is ? Cause the system is the exact same, so yeah....
1yr
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biplav_subedi
I want the upgrade system. 5 stars * 5 stars = 25 stars I want the upgrade system. 5 stars * 5 stars = 25 stars I want the upgrade system. 5 stars * 5 stars = 25 stars
1yr
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Writerx
I really enjoyed reading this novel. It had an amazing story line! But, please update it more than one chapter a day. I can’t get enough. Him becoming richer really made me happy since what he’s been through.
1yr
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Vergin_till_now
Good work keep it up.....one problem tho i just dont want bitches like sofia to just u know order the mc he is like what can i do and all....because then he is more like a beta mc which i personally dont like....i read the latest chapter as of yet and i hope mc treats sofia the same she did to him. THATS ALL AND STORY IS QUITE GOOD.
1yr
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