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After surviving a school shooting, a young victim wakes up in the world of *Twilight* with a new body and powers beyond understanding. As they adjust to this strange place, they must face their past and the dangers that come with their new abilities.
p.s: don't read if you don't have any patience for a newcomer.
warning: slow plot
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Tanto potencial desperdiçado, não tem nenhum desenvolvimento de personagem, a história é extremamente confusa com coisas aleatórias jogadas de lado sinceramente decepcionante
While it is very good as a god should he not possess a Godly body attributes such as super strength etc ? Technically as the God of the Sky he could have a home in the sky but it would require him to learn to build a home worthy of a God. I believe he has vast potential with his divinities and I hope he pushes them to the limit while being creative on ways to use them. Overall however fantastic job may Jaxon & Leah remain together for eternity.
I haven’t really read the book yet just read the synopsis and saw the part “after surviving a school shooting a young victim wakes up in the world of Twilight” I think he just died, got shot went unconscious apparently in twilight now, yeah probably died { Don’t mind the review it just wouldn’t let me post otherwise}
The grammar is great, and the story premise is good. The introduction felt a bit shaky, but Jaxon feels like a person with his own independent thoughts thankfully. No angst/unnecessary, so that's already great.
The idea was good and it was off to a good start until everything became about the music industry and starting a company there is little to no plot and the story get quite dull very fast hopefully future works improve and maybe come back to this and do a rewrite because the idea has potential
keeping writing. this novel has its issues. But I have read the worst novels out there. this one is good for a new writer. don't worry about the haters and take their every comment you get to be a better writer. I like this novel
For a noob writer , you did amazing . However i do wish you spend less time on the music . But that’s just my opinion. The only thing you need to work on, is your update stability. I would have gave you 2 stars on that rating . But it seems like your pretty young and living with your mom. That’s what it seems. So we all know how things goes when you’re that young.
Liked the background setting you set up, with Vampires having rotten bunch, enslaved humans in caves, and the hybrid baby was surprising but actually expected. Many vampires lose themselves in bloodlust and lust, who to say there aren't more hybrids than in Canon.
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Wonderful, just wish you could increase the word count for each chapter that is slice of life. . . .
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The first good sign while reading this, is the fact the MC does bash Bella because previous him broke up with her. He understands she is just an 13 yo girl. Second sign is the fact he is charismatic and not off putting by being edgy. Yeah, the expectation bars are low for every twilight fanfic, so glad the author seems like he knows what he is doing. You have talent Mr. Author.
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Unique setting for twilight, although Canon just started, I'm eager for more. Also, kinda odd and new seeing people want a Bella romance. . . .. .
I like the MC interactions with Leah and her family. They sound so genuine and funny. I wish to see more of Seth, bro got enough personality to carry the original twilight series😂😂😂 I wonder if the romance will be as straightforward as it looks with Leah, or maybe someone else. None did a Bella as far as I remember, and here she seems to be his Ex.
Ok, first impression from reading the first 10 chapters, it is thankfully not cringy. I like his personality, he actually feels like a person who was thrust into twilight and has that: "Not my business, not my occupation, not my problem" mindset regarding the plot, which is something I respect.
The chapters have a nice build up, and the grammar is great, unlike others I read *Me staring at other twilight fics judgmentally* The story doesn't fell... Tacky? if that makes sense. Meaning not overly melodramatic or cringe.
There are a lot of problems with the novel. 1- there are a lot of logical loopholes, for example when he pushes everyone out of the classroom and locks himself inside with a criminal for no good reason, and he has time to write a whole note to his family instead of escaping .2-the story jumps around and keeps skipping from scene to scene with no consistency, you see him in class one time and then suddenly he's in the theater singing and playing the piano and then in the parking lot. I'm not sure what exactly is going on here and I don't want to know .3- why the hell is Mr. Bertie teaching him? He's supposed to be 13 and Mr. Bertie is a high school teacher .4- this guy barely spent a day after his reincarnation and started flirting and singing on stage instead of grieving about his passing and what happened to his family in his previous life. 5- I'm pretty sure he supposed to sign up for a competition before it even started bye a couple of days. I want stay more than my welcome so goodbye
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