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Jay_Exile
A short yet great story not much to showcase potential but enough to enjoy and fan fiction. Beginning to end it was interesting read. Don't regret reading it but wish I found it sooner to binge read.
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Felicia_Summer357
I liked how the story was tolled and written. I am glad you wrote it, it was very good. Short and sweet. I like how if there was no evil what would there be to fight.
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pr1ncess_f0x19
I believe it would be better if it shows more of the effect over time for the characters. The concept is very new and original. I want to see more of what is happened.
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Justin_Gumieny
I want to see more the story is just getting good. I'll add more stars to story development as more and more pages are added. I just find out it finally got another page, when I try to go to the next page it says the end, I hope this isn't the very end all ready, it's just getting good and many people may not know about the comic yet. I hope it continues and I look forward to it.
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box_boy_sup
more than 140 letters?! ok well it is good short but sweet.................................................................................. done.[img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=recommend][img=exp][img=fp][img=update]
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Kane_Lebel
This is totally underrated but I really hope it picks up in view's and support cause I think its great. The art style if really well done, its has a really good start to a story and I really cant wait to see how it progresses.
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HeLLbou
With just a few chapters it's all ready getting interesting. Seems that the newbie hero is is going to be the enemy for the greater good which would be very interesting and if that's the case this will be a interesting story of good needing evil.
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HeLLbou
It’s very creative and even though I wish for more, it perfect the way it leaves people wanting more. Also a good idea for different adaptations if people would want to continue this story.
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Christina_Triplett
I love it so much it's sort and fun! and let's your imagination run wild! (Now I need to make it longer to post it).......................................................
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Justin_Gumieny
With just a few chapters it's all ready getting interesting. Seems that the newbie hero is is going to be the enemy for the greater good which would be very interesting and if that's the case this will be a interesting story of good needing evil.
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Goofygoob
A short story about the rise of a young hero in a too perfect society; who finds his role in the world.
It’s very creative and even though I wish for more, it perfect the way it leaves people wanting more. Also a good idea for different adaptations if people would want to continue this story.
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