the story was a good read however it felt like there was more needed .the character could have been developed more and there were too many questions left unanswered .The ending felt like ,[img=Out of it][img=Why]where's the rest.
I love this story it took me q and a half days to finish it so glad I did, too bad it completed like that I wanted to see they're future and the child, it was such a plot twist when yuan xi tried to run over qiao, but overall 5/5
drawing and character design was very good..however the story development was ok.. but no so complete.. hope its shows a happy ending.. but still for me this is 9.o..
A little bit more to the ending would have been appreciated. Him finding out about what happened to her family and more back grounded information about the group she left would have worked well. Over all its a good short comic. keep up the great work.
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