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Long Gone
4.72 (33 Bewertungen)
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Ava Salford and Annie Garcia have been best friends since they were little. But one day Annie mysteriously dies and everyone forgets what happens to her. But Ava is determined to find out what happened to her best friend as well as Noah tagging along. She comes across a creature and from there on her whole life changed. She starts seeing ghost and dead people. She goes to find out why this is happening to her just for her to meet her worst nightmare. She starts gaining these supernatural powers. As she goes on her quest to find Annie she uses her powers to lure people to help her and ends up in the underworld. Would she find her way back to Noah or would she be stuck in the underworld forever? Will she ever find Annie again?
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I like how this story began. It is well-developed. It is very interesting, I fell in love with the novel. The only thing I can point is the inconsistent tense but overall the story is very good. Good Job author
Love the suspense and thrill vibe of this story... the plot is intriguing- unfolding the truth behind the mysterious death of a friend. It will be an exciting journey for both ML and FL. Keep it up author. Update more because reader would be eager to read what happened next.
ok first of all-- WOW, this book is definitely a page turner. I really love the way this book gave off a mysterious vibe right off the bat! I also love the way you described their friendship; you were not really descriptive but keeping it simple gave more feeling and weight as to how much close they are. I really liked it. Keep up the good work!
I love this novel, It is really amazing,. Can't stop from scrolling down to see what's next, Did a great job, keep it up 😊
I am hooked! This novel really takes you to a level higher than your ordinary mystery novel. Although there are a few grammar errors, i couldn't stop myself from scrolling down to know what's next. Great job, author-san!
I honestly really like the characters in this story😭😭. I can't wait for more chapters!Enjoyable read. Cute story with natural dialogue and relatable characters. I would definitely recommend this one.
I liked reading the book. There are only four chapters yet so I can't say much but the author has done a great job in setting the storyline. The next chapters would be full of suspense. Can't wait. All the best!
I will be honest and I am here to make improvements for your novel. Some dialogues has no name on who said it....and her action or feelings while saying it. It was hard at first when you write about the tenses. It was inconsistent and you need to choose one. Present tenses were more alluring to hear and past tenses were more used by matured writers. It was on you what to choose. And for more further improvements, please read more novels of expert writers of the same genre and learn from them. How to write dialogues, synopsis and everything. Please do the same to my book Waking Up In Undead World. See you later!
I like the unpredictability of this novel. An amazing novel that we can look upon to. The story is still developing and still has a lot to offer as the story progress. But this is my initial rate to the author to show my support.
A fascinating detective novel. The character is deep, interesting. The plot is dynamic. It is interesting to read. The novel is generally good, apart from a few moments where it appears - cliché plots. But in general it is very exciting. Good luck to the author!
This is my initial review to show my support for the author until the story is completed. Keep up the great work, and may you see the rightful end with a renewed soul and purpose in life. You rock! I'm hoping you could also help me with my beloved work, WAR GROUNDS (all caps please. The original version got bugged) by dropping an initial review. Cheers!
Very intriguing horror story that the author is trying to create here I can see, really got that sense of atmosphere, with minimum grammar mistakes I can find. Added to my collection, keep it up Author!
This book is lit!! I like how it began............... well developed characters.......good story lines......Author has done a great job....Keep going..🖤🖤
Simple and sweet. You could use some more mysterious and suspenseful scenarios but seeing that it's just chapter 6 so far, it's to be expected that it's just getting there. Well-balanced story progression and build-up. Only thing to point out is your tense usage, sometimes it gets a little inconsistent. But that's just a minor issue since us authors tend to do that as well. All in all, great job. Continue on writing ^0^
Great story, needs a few grammar corrections but otherwise well written. I cant wait to find out how the story plays out!! Keept writing!😁👏👍
Creepy, mysterious and highly addictive. The book grabs the reader's attention right from the first chapter as two school girls walk home from school, but only one of them makes it, the other turning up dead. And so begins the mystery as many similar deaths have occurred in the protagonist's town before. A great beginning, and now the protagonist has started seeing dead people. This one will give you the creeps in the best possible way!
I'm not usually into horror since I get nightmares but this was really thrilling and I just couldn't stop reading! It was really intense too!
Thia story is heart wreaking! It made my heart crumpled. This story is interesting enough to me and made me hooked! I gotta say job well done with the story. Kudos to the one who made it and have a nice day![img=recommend]
The story manages to be engaging and fun to follow. The interactions between its characters can be stirring sometimes, though some might find them cheesy. The story happens too fast. By the first chapter, we already have the conflict of the story presented to us, without having the opportunity of getting to know the characters. This is a problem if you want your readers to get to care about them. The plot slowly starts to compensate for this but it is definitely a weak point. You also need to work with your grammar. There are some misspellings and sometimes you mix grammatical tenses. Nothing that makes the story a chore to read but you definitely need to work on this. Otherwise, the plot never manages to fall down and advances in a good direction. Keep working on it.
Ok.... Whoa. Firstly, I'm addicted to this type of genre, and second, I'm tending to like the main character! Something tells me it won't be easy for her in the rest of the book but hey! I only read the first chapter and count me in on the rest!