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Traveling across the multiverse with a OP System [DROPPED]
4.42 (20 Bewertungen)
Zusammenfassung
{This is the story of the MC reincarnating and traveling through worlds. The MC can be considered extremely OP, and this is a wish-fullfilment history, if it's not your type of history feel free to leave. }
Luke a normal white collar workers who loved anime, manga, novels and movies was walking back to his home, suddenly a lightning bolt felt from the sky and stroke him resulting in his death.
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First world: Naruto
Second world: - - -
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This story is wrote for fun, nothing serious but I'm going to try to make it consistent and atleast not shit and english is not my first language and this is my first time writing a fanfic, feel free to criticize me.
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Disclaimer: I do not own Naruto or other animes that will appear in this fanfiction. Please support their official release and know that I do not claim ownership of any of the characters that will appear here except for my Original Characters (OC).
Disclaimer 2: I do not own the cover, credits to its owner.
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Release Frequency: 6ch/week.
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Aaaah is it bad to have hope? .................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
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It's pretty good so far. But I'll be pretty disappointed if his mama doesn't come in the harem... It's wish fulfillment. So please shut your brain while reading this.
Good story author san..I recommend going to dxd world or mha world.................,........................................................................
Wassup guys its me OtakuReverence , umm havent read the novel yet Just putting a review, anyways i hope this novel is good and isnt a disappointment like most novels anyways cya~
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Damn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so far ๐๐Great Chap, keep up the awesome job ๐Damn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so far ๐๐Great Chap, keep up the awesome job ๐Damn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so far ๐๐Great Chap, keep up the awesome job ๐Damn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so far ๐๐Great Chap, keep up the awesome job ๐Damn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so far ๐๐ Great Chap, keep up the awesome job ๐
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Itโs a good start, might need some fix here and there but other than that itโs a good novel, for second world you can use my hero academy, marvel, dc, bleach, one piece, Toriko or Pokรฉmon. this is only suggesting that i can think of, but if you choose marvel please make a comedy with deadpool.
horrible romance, protagonist has an omnipotent system, OP lineage, 16 years old is a jounin, actor gave op powers to nerf in the first chapter.
5 stat rating so author wont drop and will hopefully update MOAAAAAR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee Moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee Moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee Moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee Moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee Moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee Moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee Moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
The writer makes very interesting changes in the story, the MC is strong, he wants to train and have fun doing it, even having a system that can give him everything, he only takes what is necessary to grow to his best ability, and incredibly he does it in a way that It doesn't bother me, as he skipped the part of learning Fuijutsu to a Mastered one, but he practiced his Ninjutsus and Taijutsu. But still, you have your preparations made in case something goes wrong and will use the system without restrictions if necessary.
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onegai......................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................onegai.................................................................................................................................................................................................onegai.............................................................................
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the typical story about an MC with too much potential/power and too little ambition, i don't know if you see it like me but i think he's too passive, and there is just so many time skip, like all we saw of him or the rest of character in his first 12 years was a couple of dialogue and that's all.
I like this story. The chapter are not too short and the writing quality is pretty good not like those chinese fanfiction where it is needed to guess what does mean what. The other points are all very good too.
It's a very fun fanfic to read ............๏ผโฏยฐโกยฐ๏ผโฏ๏ธต(\ .o.)\๏ผโฏยฐโกยฐ๏ผโฏ๏ธต(\ .o.)\๏ผโฏยฐโกยฐ๏ผโฏ๏ธต(\ .o.)\๏ผโฏยฐโกยฐ๏ผโฏ๏ธต(\ .o.)\๏ผโฏยฐโกยฐ๏ผโฏ๏ธต(\ .o.)\๏ผโฏยฐโกยฐ๏ผโฏ๏ธต(\ .o.)\๏ผโฏยฐโกยฐ๏ผโฏ๏ธต(\ .o.)\๏ผโฏยฐโกยฐ๏ผโฏ๏ธต(\ .o.)\๏ผโฏยฐโกยฐ๏ผโฏ๏ธต(\ .o.)\๏ผโฏยฐโกยฐ๏ผโฏ๏ธต(\ .o.)\
I wrote this so it's gonna be good or bad who knows. I'm just a shameless author reviewing myself Xd .