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Demoniac
4.65 (48 Bewertungen)
Zusammenfassung
Mazoku was sacrificed in a Satanic ritual and due to that was possessed by a demon with one thought and goal: demolition. Now he regained his part of his mind he has two goals in his mind: restoring his soul and getting vengeance on who sacrificed him. However, it won't be easy. Everyone is against him with the turmoil he caused and his nemesis is at the top of the leadership. Mazoku will need his friends with him to get revenge on who wronged him. It's time for the demoniac to burn it all!
/The art is not mine but a combination of different works. All credit goes to the original creators./
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Another review from me! Your novel was captivating, with superb battle scenes that was narrated skillfully, this will become big in the future! The dialogues were realistic and I can hear them say it in my mind. Quite amazing by the way! Hope you find success in the future.
So first, the story has an interesting start (I'm talking about the prologue. The other one although it said that don't read but yeah I did and it make me dizzy 😂). Second, the characters introductions were clear same with the narratives. Hmmm. The synopsis maybe you could some punctuation marks especially the first paragraph to make it look better. World background is detailed too.
Worth reading novel for fans of adventure and action. Follow demoniac in his quest of revenge. Novel is more based on action and fighting which are distinct qualities I look for novel to read. I am already urging author to update as fast as he can for giving us more chapters....
The story has a good plot that will bring readers in. The main character and the world he is in seems interesting. I can see that there are many more to tell in this hidden gem story. The author is currently editing it so I hope it will improve more as some events are not described clearly and I suggest that some dialogues be separated from the paragraphs as I find it too long and I am lost from what I'm reading. (Although it's just my advice, it's up to you author!) Overall, the story will be a good novel to read in one's free time. Keep the good work author!
Interesting plot. I don't usually read action and adventure, but this one is really impressive. The writing flow is good. Good work author! Added to my library.
This is a very nice story! The description used throughout is great and really emersive! Ocassionally due to some gramatical errors it can be a little tricky to follow, but overall, really enjoyable!
This is the author of Totally In Love and the username BellsandLexShow on the forum. I want to just give a huge thumbs up to this author!!! I really love how you described the world's background. I was following along with the story. It just overall flowed together I think. Really love how you wrote the story, and the plot as well. I recommend checking this book out if your interested in demonic things. I really found myself interested in the character development of Mazoku, and how you came up with how he should be. Good luck author!!!!
Author, I like the way of how you describe the fighting scenes, it is so detailed, well done. The story is for sure narrated at a fast pace to match the genre and the action. The plot is very captivating and it seemed that you put a lot of thought into the world background. There are just some grammatical issues, but I see you are very motivated in improving.😊 I think your work has great potential, please keep up with the good work! I like what I read so far. [img=recommend]
This is wonderful, I'm totally in love with this book... The plot is interesting, the style of writing is more than unique, and I'm totally hooked by the characters... The book is already in my library, and I can't stop myself from being addicted [img=update]
I read the novel only after editing, so I don't know what state it was in before. But basically the story is very good and the richness of details of the novel is very high and well done, the details are so well written that it felt like I was watching instead of reading, there were only some details in relation to certain parts of the dialogue when the speech of two people was not separated by paragraph, the scene was detailed between the lines, so it didn’t hinder the reading at all, it was just unusual. So I would like to say that this novel is very well done, keep up the good work :)
The plot and story line are very interesting. The world building is great and it is described well but what I like the most is that the fight scene is greatly described. Writing quality and style is okay I guess. Updating stability is not a problem.
First of all, the premise is interesting. it's rehashed, yes, but tropes are good no matter how many different ways they are retold. Then, I believe author's going through and editing, thus writing quality is quite good in first few chapters. You can almost tell the divide from where edit happened. Yet, the story thus far is so good you continue. After all, it's not like you can't understand what's being conveyed, and the story indeed makes you look forward to next chapter. .. A job well done.
This is a great book with a lot of potentials. Author, please work on the flow of the story and the plotline. The world background is kinda.... I don't know. However, good book, worth reading.
A fine read, in my opinion, the writing style of this novel is quite exquisite! The character design is also nice! The world background is very good. Overall, it's definitely an interesting read. I hope you have a great journey of being an author.
Interesting story. The author did a good job making a dark world of samurai, creating mysterious characters and demons. The fight scene is described perfectly with the right setting and atmosphere. Looking forward to reading more chapters ❤
The whole gravity of the situation the protagonist encounters hits from the beginning and it continues to build momentum from there. The characterisation is also quite haunting and the fight scenes have a high tension. However, the setting itself is a little disorienting as there's little to no description of it so the image is harder to visualise and there is lesser immersion. The plot has many elements that have potential to be a grear story and it's certainly exciting to see the pursuit of revenge as a plot element.
This was GREAT. The story is well written and I know its kind of Dark but it really is worth reading. I wish for more updates in the future. Kudos!
The author's writing skill is very good and this is one interesting story! Each scene is nicely described which proved the author's talent and rich imagination. Keep up the good work!!
Its a great and interesting story to read. The author narrates it in an amazing way it's hard to pull back when you're drawn to it, but the only thing I think the author should on is the description of characters(most especially their face)
Well, your characters sure are interesting, and your plot seems okay, the intro was also nice, but you could do with improving your writing styles since it's rather unique, so as to get the best out of yourself and also amuse your viewers to the fullest rather than confuse, as not everyone may get the full picture of your descriptions, but still a very good read.
A useful literary review, and I don't want to assume, but I hope this is a useful review, answers one question. Is the work of literature worth reading? It is that question I hope to answer for any potential reader. To quote one of my all time favourite bands, Rush. "Tell me the good news first" That's just what I'll do. The good news is this, the story is amazing. The characters are great and the dialog is nearly, oh so nearly flawless. The imaginative story will draw a reader in. The characters are very well developed in a very short amount of time. It's clear that the author has inhabited this world, he's walked through it. He's talked to the characters and emphasised with them. Even the antagonists have relatable moments. At times, you'll even root for them. In short, the story is good, it's really good, So that's the good news, that leaves the bad. Unfortunately, there is bad. We've established that the story is good, it's sad to say, but that good story is buried beneath less than ideal writing, The author made the bizarre choice to bend and far too often, disregard standard writing conventions. These conventions aren't there to put up a barrier to writing, but rather for the sake of the reader. The disregard of these writing conventions will lead any potential reader to intense confusion. The story can be understood, but only with significant effort of the intended audience. The webnovel does not separate dialog between characters with a new line. A change in scene isn't preceded with a paragraph break. The sentence are too long, appropriate punctuation is not utilised, and tenses are changed on the fly. Why one would use the future tense to describe what happened in the past is beyond me... The prose is far too often muddled. This muddling pulls you out of the story, forcing you to reread what you just read in order to understand the meaning. One of the chief intentions behind webnovels, an intention I'm not a fan of, but have to recognise, is that they are intended to be light reading. Something you can read on your commute, at a bar or at home for accessible entertainment. When the prose forces effort from the reader, that intention is defeated. So, is Demoniac worth reading? My answer is maybe. The story is fantastic, and I'm genuinely excited to see where it could go, I'm excited by the prospect of revelling in vicarious satisfaction as the MC face slaps those who betrayed him. I'm not, however, excited by the prospect of having to trudge through the nigh impenetrable writing. I hope the author polishes this crude gem to reflect the criticism I've laid out. I sincerely look forward to reading an edited version of this and relaying to any potential reader that Demoniac is indisputably worth your time. To the author: I know this review is probably not what you want to hear, but it's honest. I almost didn't write this review at all, but I feel like the changes you can make to this book to make it great is worth the feelings of guilt I'm feeling for potentially inspiring them. Writing Quality: 2/5 Stability of Updates: 5/5 Story development: 3/5 (hampered by the prose) Character Design: 4/5 World Background: 3/5 (hampered by the prose) Overall: 17/25