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But then all of the sudden the icy breath of winter began to blow sending fallen snow across the ice. And for a moment Prim could hear nothing else but the whispers on the wind.
They were talking to her. But she couldn't understand them, the voice's were extremely quiet. Almost silent all together.
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I really like the opening to the story. The whispers, meeting MC, the abandon building😱(I don’t want to say much more because then it’s a spoiler😁). The plot is very well thought out. I would like to suggest some editing and proofreading, but other than that it was a good story. My hat is tipped to you Author😊
This is a interesting story, it sure does hook up the people to come. The characters are lifelike. I could give some advice, try to add some descriptions to the background... overall its a good read I rate it 4.8 stars, Keep up the good work author! Kudos to you!
Okay new readers, please give this novel a chance 🙏. The author will surely surprise you in many ways. Okay, review proper, this novel has good execution of the concept and the dialogues were also good. Very lifelike and realistic for me. Not everyone can pull it off so easily. It was like butter being sliced by a knife. Characters were fleshed out and so far, so good! Kudos and good luck! It was an amazing experience for my part and wished for other readers to share my experience too! haha 😂 Gracias!
Ironically, I'm reading this in April( mid-summer). While the world of the novel is beautiful and cool, my own surrounding pales in comparison. what im trying to say is, this book is good and so, get your butt in here and start reading !
Nice story. Though I don't like romance genre, I will look forward to it. By reading your book I feel like I am the character in your book. Feel great!
The story is put together really well and the writing quality is good as well. It’s easy to follow and keeps me wanting to read more. keep up the great work author ✍️
I read a few chapters and i think your story was really interesting because even the title impressed me 😂 the good thing about this novel is your plot 😊😊😊
I love the story looking forward to reading more of it as you author have done well There no reason for me say anything bad the story is fine maybe later when I read more I could give a more deeper review again love the story
Even though the first chapter was small it was enough to captivate the author. Lots of mystery and suspense. Very good grammar and overall an excellent work. I also added to my collection and i think anyone should do it. Good job author.
There's an interesting mystery here that implies a lot more to come. The characters are quite likable and I like the tone which they're speaking with. If I could give some writing advice, I'd like more descriptions of settings and characters. I'd like a stronger idea of visuals, possibly through character sensory of the environment.
I enjoyed what I've read so far, a lot of potential from the author though grammar did stick out to me a good bit and was distracting at times, aside from that it was a fun read.
I find the plot of the novel truly unique. At least I haven't stumbled upon anything like it before. While the novel is only 14 chapters long, the chemistry between Prim and Benjamin is truly well done and instantly makes the reader feel close to them. This novel is truly worth a read.
Not bad at all. Just need a little improvement. If it's about grammar I can't speak anything about that... 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
Interesting, I'll be looking forward to read more of these. I like the relationship between Cass and Pram, but I'll stop there since the less you know the more fun it is.
I really love the direction this story is going! I'm intrigued and have saved it to my library so I can keep track of updates. Some slight editing could be used here and there, but overall very well done!
The chapters are short and much fun to read. I highly reccomend the story to almost any1. All is well written, seasoned with good plot, and dialogues, which seem much of nattural.
Wow, honestly I don't read fantasy romance quite a lot. But the synopsis of your book intrigued me. It's beautiful. The plot is good too. Keep it up author-chan.
The history have a mysterious plot and is very well written, it's amazing so far, it is worth of five stars for sure. keep up the good work :)
It was a phenomenally written story, and had very well worded character development. Where you left off, I was on the edge of my seat. Great writing! I look forward to future updates.
the story itself is quite interesting, things happen here and there leaving you intrigued more and more. this story is well put together and has actually got me hooked, it has me wanting to read more. I wish the author well, goodluck i hope you and this book do well.