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Find me in your memory

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Autor: maverick_maya

4.77 (22 Bewertungen)

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Meet Elena Carlo
The sister of the cold-blooded king of the international underworld. Not only did she come from one of the most powerful criminal family she was also known as a genius and prodigy amongst her peers. She had everything with her luxury, money, beauty, and most importantly her brother who raised her making everyone envious. He was her everything just like she was his until one cold night where she was assassinated. Just when she thought everything has come to an end. She woke up as Xin Xiulin an 18-year-old orphan who has lost everything. Was a new beginning a curse or a blessing?
Meet Jun Zixuan
The president of a multibillionaire company.The king of the country's business world who only a very few can dare to offend. Having his heart broken already he believed he can never love again until he starts to notice changes in the silent orphan in his house. Her similarities to a certain someone made it easier for her to worm her way into his heart. While all she knew was familial love can he teach her something new? While she would like to go back to her brother can he stop her?
But what if her shadow of the past never left her? Would it come back to haunt her? Will she embrace that fire or burn in it?
But the life of Xin Xiulin wasn't as easy as it looked. While past acquaintances kept coming can she know who is a friend and who is a foe?
If you want to know the answer come join her and him in this wonderful journey of love, hatred, and longing.
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This is my first and original novel.
The cover is not mine. Credits to the original owner.
There is no RAPE or MISUNDERSTANDING
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Account_nolonger

From the beginning I was intrigued, I found it mysterious and unique at the same time, the ending of the first chapter was pretty scary, and I totally loved it, keep up the good work, I recommend this book💕💕

1yr
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Sunshine_26

Hey I came across your novel, it's really nice and something unique, the story is really Captivating, I finished all the chapters in one sitting and really wanna know what happens next, what juns will do now? How Adrian and Elena will reunite? Waiting for lots of chapters to know this interesting story further🥺😁

10mth
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hidingpanduh

I've been reading up until chapter twenty or so. I really like the beginning of the story, it feels very clear in direction. Elena is an intriguing character and it's interesting to see into her life and what happens to her body and consciousness. Transmigration/reincarnation is not a new concept but I like the way you focused on a Russian character becoming a Chinese character. However, I started getting quite confused with all the different place and time skips, and I think when you go through editing you can think from the reader's perspective too. As of now, I think the story needs more work on characterization and story development. I want to be able to focus more on Elena's character but there are a lot of setting and time skips. Overall, enjoying the story and I like Elena's interactions with different characters. The slap chapter tho hahaha

1yr
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MaryahLu

The story flows very nice and clear! It kept me looking forward what will happen next! Many Characters with remarkable personalities.

1yr
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Emmanuel_Abraham_2079

Nicely done indeed. A beautiful story that caught my attention and got me engulfed in the flow, the suspense, and the dynamism. The story development and the character design are just awesome.

1yr
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blossoms_hkhk

I read first few chapters and loved the story. The plot was captivating and characters too were good. I am looking forward to read more chapters. Keep up the good work author 👍

1yr
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Emmanuel_Abraham_2079

I love the pace at which the story ran and the tension that filled the air right from the start. You just want to see what's next! I love the suspense too, it makes me want to read more!

1yr
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Little_North_Star

Dear miss Maya i love your book, this is definitely one of the best and interesting transmigration books ive read..i lovedd the first few chapters and i must say it was worth the read[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

1yr
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Willhem_Duy

A great twist to a classic reincarnation trope. This is unique on its own, though there are a few typos here and there. I hope you continuing this story, author.

1yr
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livingandreading

This book is golden. I absolutely loved it. Can't wait to read more. I was totally immersed in the plot that I dint know how long I read. Good writing and the characters are really lovable. I'm still waiting to see how Elena will deal with whoever was doing the villainous things. Absolutely great book!

1yr
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KayLillyt_1

A beautiful name for a beautiful story. Grabs your attention and pulls you a long for a wild sweet ride of love and beauty. Very well written and very well developed. It is so worth it. Every word, every chapter, every character. I sure am hooked. Well done.

2yr
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KenShimizu

It's really good! I specially like the cover and name, I've always like reincarnation books but this just spectacular, Keep up the good work!

2yr
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Arkbrave

From the synopsis... The story itself ... Title... Everything was genuine and spectacular... I always loved reading reincarnation books, but this one offers something new to the table as well... Kudos! Looking forward to seeing more of your work

2yr
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waurpel

A great twist on a classic trope. I don't think I've ever seen a reincarnation story that happens quite like this. The dynamic between life continuing yet somehow disconnected. It's interesting, but quite difficult to follow. I think what keeps it back the most is that multiple characters speak in the same paragraph. Spacing out conversations will make it clearer who is speaking and will make it easier for readers to follow along. A great story regardless! I look forward to its continuation!

3yr
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Crown_of_Flame

When I was reading I realized how your title suited the story. I also liked your cover. And, most important I'm really liking your story. Apart from some typos, the story is really attracting me. The way you are leading it is also good. And, I'm waiting for how you'd reveal every mystry. [img=recommend] 😉

3yr
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Yonko_master

Unique narrative in the reincarnation genre, character representation is excellent, you have so much potential to grow this narrative, looking forward to future updates. It would be much appreciated if you could give a comment about my book as well and list what I have to improve

3yr
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REaper

Unique story in the reincarnation genre, character portrayal is too good, you have so much potential to develop this story, waiting for the interesting updates in the future

3yr
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J_Writing

So I am absolutely taken with this story. The concept is a wonderful change to what you typically see nowadays and the character's personalities stand out from one another instead of bleeding together. There are some grammar and paragraph structure issues but even still it is something that I want to see more of. Characters with faults, a storyline that is coated with mystery and even a bit of romance; Jun Zixuan just stole my heart! And Jun Bohai is also just the cutest thing!

3yr
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kuhaku_sora

The concept is there, and I really like the entire story of your novel! And I love your book cover! There are only two things that i'd like to point out. Grammar and the spacing. You should edit the story first thoroughly before publishing it(by using spaces and other sentences that needs editting). In that way, you could show and tell the story to us, readers. An example of that sentence would be this (taken from your novel) "Weren't the questions which were running in her mind because she knew who her brother was, the only thing she knows is that she is supposed to live at all cost now." One tip that I could give you is reading the story out loud! You will see the difference by writing it and narrating it.

3yr
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VeryVyle

Nicely done book with interesting characters and starting plot. You might need some fixes on the use of space and dots, but other than that, you are doing well. The story is really heartfelt, and we can feel every occasions as the protagonist would. Keep it up!

3yr
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