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Trapped in his obsession

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Autor: Darkswan

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Zusammenfassung

A 17 year old high school student by the name of Ayako Akari. She was a kind and one of the most beautiful girl in school, one of the reason for her not being popular was because she was poor. Unknown of the dangers the girl made one of the biggest mistakes of her life by becoming a fashion designer and a model who turned out to be her familiar assistant and sister in law. He is handsome but also possessive and even carried the powers of half vampire and half kitsune. Trapped in his obsession she became apart of an unknown and very sadistic world.

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Samerah_Kassim

Your book just began and i see it is your third entry into the WSA, it is well written so far and clearly this story has potential. I hope to read more and keep up the good work,

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Xena_Draxil

Firstly this is giving me Brothers Conflict vibes. Then I like it how the story is slowly and concretely building up. There were some instances where I was bugged by the grammatical errors. As far as I've read, I found the story intriguing and I'll definitely recommend this to all who are interested in this genre

2yr
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foxyash

wow...I'm hooked to your book author...it's an interesting book and I can't wait to read more......please update....wanna know what happens now. The characters and plot are amazing! Loved it...

2yr
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Ash_Stay

I must say that the story is quite interesting and has a lot of potential. I read only some chapters and I can already see it's potential. Good work, Author

2yr
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AreeSensei

The story has some pretty interesting plot devices that deserve a better execution and would totally stand out with well fleshed-out characters. The author is working on improving it, so be patient and understanding. I feel there's potential in there, and all which is needed, is something more detailed and alive. Something more honest and true. So, go past the English mistakes, and give it a chance^^

2yr
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Grandmasters

Go darkswan! I will leave a review now. This novel has a slow start and was likeable. The characters were solid and likeable. The narration was decent without obvious mistakes. A lot more chapters so we can be rest assured. Good luck with the Spirity! I hope we all win! 😁

2yr
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bella_melodia

Your book is interesting. The synopsis and starting have the capability to keep the reader hooked. The words are describing everything beautifully which makes it easier to understand and without lots of problems. I would like to thank the author for introducing us to such a beautifully designed world.

2yr
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nia_94
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your book had a potential. I really love the cover photo, and it's attracted me straight away to read the story. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

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Akari_Uzumaki

I must say after reading the first few chapters, i know that your story will be great and i hope to see more books form you, keep up the good work and congrats on your third wsa entry.

2yr
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SerafinaF

This is a fun and light read about school life. The characters are interesting and interact with each other well. Looking forward to more chapters from you, author. Good job.

2yr
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Unicorn_Kaki

The synopsis doesn't say much about the story at first, but at first glance it looks like every other cliche story, but I have come to find that this book has it's own twist and turns. I await the further chapters. Author hurry-

2yr
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Xuli
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Feels preety interesting to me the character the scenes are well managed and their personalities are loveable too. I think this is going to be a great work from author. Keep it up and there are few gramatical errors but rest all are ok.[img=recommend]

2yr
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