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Ryu_Is_Charming

Plothole everywhere and the author fails to correctly spell in minor cases. I gave it a low rating as it truly needs work. A story needs a hook. I have only read the first chapters but it definitely isn’t the best.

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Hero_MT

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Over_Lord_9904

Bruh one of the most dumbest mc ever and this book is very cliche. The first 5 chapters are the hardest to get through as it makes you lose some braincells.

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Dao_of_Melancholy

Amazon work mate keep it up 👍. As a friendly price of advice try adding an image on the cover it helps attract readers Yup yup yes yes I yup yup yeah yeah I

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CopyPaste1

id you wanna read about a beta/brain-dead Mc , here is your novel! .... .......................................................

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Xeno_Xavier

I have read up to chap 3 and I seriously can't keep going the writing mistakes are killing me and the characters are one dimensional. I like the idea but not the execution.

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Blue_Bird_0758

giving this 3star cause I know how hard is to write a novel . and not giving this 5 star cause author don't consider the reader point of view and expectations. also the last and last stupidity of the author is showing a tragedy story in a anime series where the start was not that tragic . why danmaci was famous for its first start was not with tragic background story. and that they way we like to read it's Fanfiction novel of this anime. sure later tragic story was shown. my point is that don't start a tragic story . now's day readers much of them don't like to read tragic story from the start . the start of the plot should be one that keeps reader expectations high. like not sad or happy. or happy type plot.

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Giorgi_Kakaladze

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whitethief274

I m very picky when it comes to give rating but I m giving 5 stars just because this is first ever danmachi FF I liked all other danmachi stories do not have what this one have , an excitement factor. I like it so keep it up

LV 14

Sommerscave

MC is an interesting Character thats getting build over time expect a slow paced adventure Story with a Nice MC that should be atleast Not naive

LV 1

David_Vargas_1673

por que se borro noooooooooooooooo q paso que alguien me diga plizzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

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Vitor_Gamer_Br

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LV 1

Jokan

Es una de las mejores tramas que me ha gustado, espero que pueda seguir continuando. Me gusta como va la historia y como van desenvolviendo a los personajes 😁👍👍

LV 12

gamingsus

hello how are you i want next chapter pls help its to much cliffhanger uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu

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Giorgi_Kakaladze

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LV 12

gamingsus

,.............................................................................................................................................its very good only the update chapter is slow but its ok

LV 12

gamingsus

I found gold$ I want moarrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr

LV 1

The_Zeta

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