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A guy gets reincarnated into Lookism as Daniel Park, come and read how he will throw hands with anyone cause he isn't the pussy the protagonist was.
An Au Lookism fanfiction, so some minor things might be different but the essence is that. the protagonist will change the plot for sure so you can even suggest something.
Don't expect the Mc to be always serious! he wants to enjoy his life.
tags:
No: Smut, yuri, yaoi, weak mc, simp, system.
Yes: Action, fast growth to overpowered, romance? i don't know.
Good read.
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Schreiben Sie eine RezensionThe only thing that is wrong with this fanfic is that sometimes there's Incorrect with the words and Grammer. Sometimes there's uncaptitalized "I"s, wrong spelling but other than that it's true to it's synopsis, This ain't no coward Daniel but someone whose stronged will. Though it needs work at it's prolonged but other than that it's a solid 8/10 in terms of Lookism FF.
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it s a nice story but its not popler so pls read it and give it a chans (i know my gramer is horbole) well i dont think anybudy well see these review
Great one liking it till now pls make More chapters. currently little Daniel personality is like
Spoiler enthüllenGostei bastante, as ações não são muito demoradas mas sinto que está indo um pouco rápido demais, eu apreciaria se o autor pudesse explicar um pouco mais dos personagens que ele cita ou estão juntos do mc, já que existem algumas pessoas assim como eu que não assistiram o anime e nem leram a obra, no momento acho que a escrita está muito boa e gostei bastante da personalidade do mc, ele não é muito (Durão) demais nem um mc (Beta) e bem razoável, seria interessante inserir um romance talvez não agora mas seria bom, nota 10/10 no momento.
Good start and this story has a lot of potential and I look forward to more updates constantly the mc is great strong character and is not intimidated.
another lookism fanfic to fill the void in my chest (make him interact with other lookism verse manhwa like viral hit and manager kim please)
This fanfiction is very mediocre. It's extremely edgy and cringe all around. The constant laughing from the protagonist is unnecessary and contributes to this childish and amateurish feeling when reading this. The flow of the story is unnatural and forced when the protagonist converses with the side cast. A great example is when the main character invites Zack for training. It's going too fast for anyone to truly savor the barebones of any good qualities of this work. An instance of this is when the main character becomes strong enough with the fat body to rival and outdo the likes of Zack. I get that with the aid of the boons, Fat Daniel will get stronger quickly. The speed of growth is still too much, and it broke the immersion for me. Don't get me started on the grammar.
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