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Dragonball X: The Ultimate System [Different Path]
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Zusammenfassung
This is a Story Centered around a man named Luke. Luke ordered what he believed to be normal collectible Dragon Balls from online. He wanted to add them to his set of Dragonball Z items but found that they were much more than what he thought, like way more!
Things take a different turn compared to the original of this story. He is the brother of Raditz and Goku but the middle brother who was born at the same time as Goku/ Kakarot.
The original is still being written but this is a different turn in fate.
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Great story need more chapter!!!! F54d2dggi4d2d3s3sa1rjjyrdxtchrs3sye3x5f3df45f3s4rt4dftfetrcy6frt4d4dftftftygxrd4ycyds4gyrgg5fd5f65dd5tyygyhufd5vgy4sd4fthhfdthhggyjhjyycghjhjihhjhhuhgggyhuggfrxthnjhgctgjjhgxttxhjjugyfyycrvrx njjjjk
This story deserves more attention. I know writing this review doesnโt help much but anything to get this story the recognition it deserves. I hope this story can pull more ratings and views. The author is a good writer and makes things interesting, keep it up! Thank you.
Nice story and great plot for chapter12 I hope author can slow down plot story ๐๐๐๐๐ Buyctxzrezufyfsydigrsrs7g7grsuhuft9g8foff7rd8rdrsyesyxtiiyvoyc7rz48fu9gdr7t8fufyf7gigdtwtcibih8gyftdyf5fug7g6fughufdrsrtgihobuctstvivyxrsrfufydtcufydyfufih6duhigyfustcycugihifydyfivudycugihufudydtdtduftayf7ghues4fyhctacihigyetf4stfugifyfihigifufjfufuf
Top 3 fan fiction dragon ball series for me keep good job ๐๐๐๐๐ 5f4ffrghytfe3drdbutfghctgjyggfttdtfhhhfcygyfxgytdxygtxdghfytdedwdwdwderght2d25gj6jythecefyhyhefwxwdgh6v6fr7tg5d6f6yr6c6rrf6drtddw4r6c5f7f6f6yttg6tf76ddrg76dd6g7f7d6f7g8d6f7g8d5yd6f7g86dfff6f7d6f77f7f7d6f7g7d6d6fug8fuf6gigiguufgufudyf7f7d6fud6d6f7fu
Im really liking this the mc's actions are quite realistic similar to what I would do. Although some parts of the story were bit forced. Looking forward to when he meets goku, that is if author doesn't drop which is v ofter here -.- .....................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Good need more chapter ๐๐๐๐๐ 5f3f2x2zrcyhycughucrtv7h5gtv4crctvtcrcyvtcc5v6c65c5cyfyggyygyfyg5ctv5vguguvuyuhhuyyycvyug6fyftctcygguhg4crygugvyhuyggyhgu6gtcttuggyygyccyvuhguugugguhuguguycvyvuguuhbuhuhuhhuhhuhuhuhuhuhuhuuhhuhhuguguhygguyugugvu
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The is a good story plz read it. So go and start reading this story if you havenโt read then your missing out. Just telling you so give it a chance.
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This book keeps getting better and better I canโt stop reading it so please keep writing this book and please write the next chapters soon so Iโll be able to read it thank you ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐
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I'm in chapter 11 and in the intro of 12 I really liked the concept of the story but the execution is bad many things happen because yes, without prior explanation the author does not explain things very well or the thought process of the mc and if he does he does it in a very simple way The truth is that I would like to see more but it is a pain in the eyes that leaves me with questions like, how? , why? I would give him another chance if he edited the previous chapters **: this review was made without any hatred for the story or the author and this is just my personal opinion and if you like the story it's fine for you
So far the novel is amazing and I love how you are setting up the story to be different from your other one. All in all the novel is amazing and I hope you continue on with it.
Not the worst, but the writing is cringe most of the time, MC makes pretty stupid wishes, dialogue is braindead.............................
need more update..... .......... ....... .......... ........ ......... .... ......... ........... .......... ........... .......... ........
as partes # IMPIEDOSOPROTAGONISTA # ANTI-HERรIPROTAGONIS sรฃo mentira, o mc e um lixo,
First let me say this, THIS IS REALLY A GOOD STORY. Writing quality is also good. But the inefficiency of mc planning can left readers wanting. As i continue to read, I find myself constantly annoyed at the back of mind. So if u can ignore that part of story then it's a great story.
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Easily one of the best dragonball fanfic well it would be perfect if the mc wasn't so op and the updates being so unstable.......................
*signs* just like that another good dropped. it fun reading it while it lasted though short I enjoyed even if it wasn't perfect it's also not bad
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