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Ms Universe System

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Autor: LeftPinky

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Zusammenfassung

"Raaaah!" Jacob let out a blood-curdling scream as he released the planet from his hand. Jacob Shepherd of the Shepherd Family.
Hailed as the fated Genius of their family when he achieved the gene core stage at the young age of 14 years old.
As Jacob fell on a tragic mission, everyone turned against his family, overthrowing them while he was left to die.
Though, things weren't as bad as they seemed, when a special being gave him a second chance. Or did it?
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Authors note - The first couple of chapters are foreshadowing. It gets better toward the end of the volume and more of the plot comes out.
Volume 2 will be a lot more action.

Recommend diving into the first volume. (I made it free).

NO R-18 yet, however, it's guaranteed.
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BONUS CHAPTERS(calculated at the end of the week):
200 Power Stones -> +1 Chapter at the end of the week
400 Power Stones -> +2 Chapter at the end of the week
600 Power Stones -> +3 Chapter at the end of the week
800+ Power Stones -> +4 Chapter at the end of the week
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    champilyn

    The story seems promising. Though there are some grammaTical error, it is not that bad. needs more chapters though, so please update more! ๐Ÿฅฐ thanks for the hard work author!

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    EIIipse

    Astounding attention to detail. This is a must read for anyone interested in fantast. The author knows just when to pop and build tension. Good going!!

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    Left_Index

    **AUTHOR NOTE** For some reason, I cannot review on my main account. It gets deleted. > Fall from grace > MC won't just suddenly become strong > Milfs > Secret Identity Okay I think I ticked all the boxes, Enjoy < 3 Don't be afraid to leave a paragraph comment, I wanna talk to my readers and hear what you guys think.

    2yr
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    meixiaolian

    There are few errors of spelling and capitalization but I can see there is a potential in this book due to the reason the author put a bit of background on "realms" and reading the definitions is intriguing. I dropped five stars for the reason that the author would improve. Great narration and lot of mysteries on the chapters.

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    Lee_Sparrow

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    hazzz1234

    wish little jack was the mc..............................................................................................................................

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    Moongirl_Mich

    The Character of the little guy at the first chapter is fine the just need more emotions though words. But keep this up and continue I also don't know much about this but it is good to read. Please keep reading the novel there are still a lot of surprise waiting for you readers. I will continue and support you.

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    May_lion

    awesome book. I can't stop reading. please upload more... I love the character design and the construction is on point. you're really good at this, please continue

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    Mister_Writer

    The background of the story is good. I'm just confused as to why the author intended to include the part when the genius of the family was born as a Prologue chapter. Regardless, the story is promising and I'm waiting for the development of the story in the future chapters.

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    yu_chan_desu

    another novel by leftpinky ๐Ÿ’– the novel has a rather intriguing note to it.. i am more of an FL book reader but i'm always up for some good ML books.. looking forward for more chapters dear author! you are improving and hoping for more colls to this new novel entry ๐Ÿ˜Š

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    Chenguang_Jinjing

    craving for chapters. [img=update][img=update][img=update]

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    Tsukasa_

    The story's pretty interesting. The plot is graspable. But the writing could be better. I noticed a few grammatical mistakes that can be easily be fixed by sheer editing. This novel indeed has potential. I shall await your improvement.

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    The_Procrastinator

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    Zukashi_zuno

    NICE BOOK! READ IT AND YOU SHALL ENJOY YOUR TIME READING IT AND ENJOY YOUR TIME ON IT. WHAT YOU NEED IN OTHER NOVELS ARE IN THIS NOVELS!!!!!

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    KatanaEvans123

    I love this book! Little Jack sounds so cute like a small little sweet guy who has a big strong heart. he just teminds me of jack and the beanstalk jack, i love the story line and how much detail and tome has gone into this and how the author had made all the chapters clear, Its all neat and wrll written! i defiantly reccomend this book! Added to my collections!

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