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Order Immortal

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Autor: Kush63

4.84 (18 Bewertungen)

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Zusammenfassung

Hade Ronen was born the second son of a powerful aristocratic family.

Growing up, Hade spent most of his early life confined within the tall walls of Greycastle, their family home, for a reason that was never fully explained to him.

At age 16, he awakened, and a year after that, he received an invitation from the prestigious Five Imperial Schools. When he accepted, little did Hade know that his decision would be the catalyst to an epic adventure that would change his life forever.
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If you like dope-ass magic, impressive world-building, an overpowered MC, a budding romance, thick plot, and to top it all off, scintillating academy action... this book promises to be a very entertaining read.

As a first-time author, constructive criticism, honest reviews, comments, and suggestions are all appreciated. If you like my work please send gifts, golden tickets, and power stones. Your support is my motivation!

Also, you can check out my discord if you want. It has character illustrations plus you can engage with me there as well.

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    Kush63
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    I'd be crazy if I didn't give my first book 5 stars. Shamelessness? You bet! With the amount of work and time I've poured into it, 5 stars is the least I can do. I'm just trying to write the best novel I can at my level. Maybe it's good, maybe it's not. Just do check it out.✌

    1yr
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    QuantumVoid

    Its a great novel, with a interesting forst chapter and thick intriguing plot, i think it easily deserves 5 Stars Well done author.

    1yr
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    Ewu_Rama

    Well, am not a fan of this kind of story but I got hooked with yours. I really love it so do keep flowing and write what you think is best and cool for the story. Kudos!!

    1yr
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    Sami_Alfoheday

    The story has a beautiful depth and the power system in it is new, and the characters have depth. I recommend reading it. I am in chapter 10, and it attracted me strongly

    9mth
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    Amera_Mee

    Not bad, need more polishing but it good.

    1yr
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    zakaria_f

    Reading Status: C147 Well written, with an original power for the MC (order), nice character development, and a well-designed background. It doesn't lack anything to compete against the top novels on Webnovel (well, maybe more chapters). For the negatives: The stability of updates is poor, and some may consider the story really slow at some points (though in my book, that's just a preference). All in all, I highly suggest reading this novel.

    3mth
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    Sanzhar_Abish

    Beautiful and well thought out story. I hope that the author will increase the pace of publication of chapters.

    8mth
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    CeyronKierakon

    Book is marvellous and has a lot of potential- that is my own opinion. I can't wait to see how author unfolds the story with the small tidbits he gives us every now and then. If he keeps at it I truly that believe this book can be a masterpiece.

    10mth
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    Gokusolos

    So far the story has been amazing keep it up

    1yr
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    Mel_goddess123

    Amazing book, loved it at the first chapter, amazing storyline that will get you seated for more, personally love the character personalization and the dialogues are nice.

    1yr
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    Just_A_Cartoon

    The writing has a beautiful description style. It is also good at introducing plots and ending them. The mini cliche's are also fun. The character design although a bit old fashioned is fair enough. Also the story has quite a lot of content. The places are described good enough that a person can get the idea of the place.

    1yr
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    Rohit_Sonune

    The story has one of the best power system . The story is good and have a good pace of things , but the updates are slow .

    2mth
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    Ruby_banks02

    Well written, enough to get me hooked... Kudos!

    9mth
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    Tama_Kun

    I read 2 chapter, the plot is average for me, but your writing skill is good

    10mth
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    CaesarAugustus

    I've been told I'm very generous with my reviews but what do y'all know. All I can say is good grammar and interesting plot. To be honest I'm just waiting for the academy and romance part.

    1yr
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    TheKray

    Okay I'm currently at chapter 5 so maybe this review will not do the book much justice. However, writing quality is good. The author uses simple and easy to understand vocabulary. So five stars. The story itself seems interesting enough but once again I'm at chapter 5 but so far so good. The characters are okay. At least they don't seem like fillers or extras yet. A chapter a day is good but for binge readers like me I feel author should increase number of chapters per day. I think novel will get much stronger following then. World background- I'm at chapter five so... Overall, thumbs up author. Keep up the good work.

    1yr
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    Pendulum_

    Looking good so far, keep writing and don't stop you'll reach high views soon bro if I could give 6 stars then I would lol

    1yr
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    MrBoness

    Man... You have it all! So please GIVE US MOOOOOOOORE!!!

    1yr
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