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Hi, my name is -ERROR-[Life] and I am a -ERROR-[Overpower] ! Yes, you've heard right ! I am -ERROR-[Life], the -ERROR- [One responsible for your and this story's development] ! Join me and my -ERROR-[Victims] now in this -ERROR-[Accursed] and long -ERROR-[Job] of mine
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Nice story so far. It's great to see you are making a comeback instead of abandoning it. Keep up the good work. Hope you will keep writing. [img=recommend]
This is a really interesting story. Though the chapters I've read was a little bit confusing but it was still enjoyable. This is not really the kind of genre I read but I still love this story. Great job author.
The Stability of Updates is really messing up my perception of this book. And the premise is so good too, it's such a shame that in 8 months the author has only managed to release 34 chapters. I wish the author doesn't drop.
I'm giving it 5 starts for not leaving the novel, I actually liked this novel (reminds me of manwhas) Still a great novel.
Since I read manhwas, I liked this story so much and the style of writing is easy to read and imagine. Keep up the good work.All the best..
The narration of the book is good but it could do a bit of improvement by being a bit interactive with the narration. Well, that's something I have trouble doing myself. Perhaps, breaking the paragraphs that got too long might help for the readers that were reading on the phone. The storyline is very unique and something I have never encountered before but the foundation or introduction of the system at the start of the story feels a little bit not enough. I only read until the first few chapters so it will probably be expanded more in the later chapters. Overall it's a nice read with some new and nice ideas.
It is important to keep the story interesting and consistent in premise. The Author has interesting premise and strong commitment to it. THe problem with System novels is the system aspect becomes just bloat and unneeded. Only to sell the power creep. Hopefully the author will keep that up.
system novels are quite common, but this one is definitely unique! i like yhe characters so far! keep going author nim!!!
I've seen that u are trying something new. Keep up the pace. Your book is a hidden gem.
The first thing I see a cover that needs some working, I am sure you could use an AI program to make your work stand out and more attractive, the synopsis could use some work to draw your users in. *Please note I only want to help you get better as I only seek to better my fellow writers* The beginning pages are very short, WN goes by 1.5k to 1.6k depending so I assume you are a new author, but it is interesting I hope you continue to do what you love.
I love your writing style and the character's names the way you introduced them is a good one, keep writing am at your back
This is a very unique system novel with it's own pace, love the description of the characters tho the dialogue felt kind of stiff in the earlier chapters it gets better! Keep going author everyone needs to read this
I'm enjoying this captivating novel! I've made it through seven chapters, and while it can be a bit confusing at times, it's undeniably interesting. The unique writing style the author has chosen adds to the intrigue. Keep up the good work, author!